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@keilah-h thanks! :3

@koshka haha, I’m glad you’re excited!! XD and yes, hectic, but good! and thank you! I hope yours calms down some too💜

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Marcel backed up a little, and the others in his group stepped forward. “Maybe there is nothing for it but to move on, find another city.”

@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.

I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.

Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay! Leon and Riker working together! I love it!

As for triggers, Riker, I believe, would avoid guns and the sounds of gunshots. I have a neighbor with PTSD from serving and his wife asks us not to shoot anything more than air rifles or bows and other quiet things because the boom of a gunshot can trigger him. Maybe Riker…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.

@hybridlore

Thanks!! 😄

@grcr Aw, love it!!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Lol. Whaley tagged me @rar and Ellette tagged me @ rea

This is very amusing.

@ellette-giselle

Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔

Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!

I’m bored… so here’s this cuz why not.

board for the antagonist of my main series and protagonist of his own novel, my beloved Sulfur…

@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!

@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll

thing is, it was by complete coincidence.

@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!

@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD

Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀

Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing. Poor Joseph. It’s completely understandable why he freaked out. I’m glad this is how you reintroduced Adrian to us instead of just having Joseph already know and accept him. It adds a little tension and some dramatic irony. It is a good way for Joseph to begin to understand…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rar @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare) This name list is so long. XD

“I’m Marcel.” He held Leon’s hand firmly. His speech was quieter and more gutteral than the other’s, and he made a conscious effort to raise it over the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?

When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.

@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge is that everyone?

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)

Before answering, Marcel glanced at Ellis, who still watched the road. The sword-wielding young man gave a nod. The soldiers had passed them.

“We came from outside the city,” Marcel called. “The soldiers think we’re…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks! 😁😁