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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 6 minutes ago
HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)
XD Same here, haha!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 9 minutes ago
YAYYY!!! This section looks good! I’m interested to see what will happen after they leave the city. Poor Roland. But Julian has a good reaction to him.
So glad you’re back!!
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-GRCR- posted an update 12 hours, 21 minutes ago
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 24 minutes ago
“I am, I’m just trying to be mature about it.” He gave her a playful wink and squeezed her hand.
Maybe if she studied his face long enough she’d find something to not like.
“Says the kid who gave every girl in his fourth grade class a valentine.”
LOL I love these parts. 💛💛
Also I have two questions… don’t listen to me if you don’t…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 32 minutes ago
*sob*
There’s a small kingdom settled on the jagged crown of a snow covered mountain—a kingdom named Modorid by the people who founded it some thousand years ago. It was the only settlement for miles and miles, and most have forgotten it’s there. It is inhabited by the Modoish—jovial people with hair as white as the snow that filled their c…
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 12 hours, 59 minutes ago
@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator
Story 10!
Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more] -
Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 8 minutes ago
… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?
Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol
- A pocket knife (are you surprised lol)
- some loose change
- some random things he picked up like an acorn probably (Strange new world, strange new things, random things in pockets)
- a picture from a couple years back of him and Nar having a flour fight (he lost)
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 58 minutes ago
I like messing with the idea of a world where almost everything you interact with is alive and has its own character. It’s fun.
Huh, never thought of that as a magic thing before. That’s a new idea for me.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
*Munches popcorn and M&Ms*
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Alpha’s reaction.
I apologize to Dante ahead of time. I like you Dante, but Alpha is not a fan.
Alpha
Before Dante could get far, he was pinned against the wall in the hallway outside their room, Alpha’s finger’s wrapped around his throat. A red vapor was thinly veiling Alpha’s eyes. “Watch yourself, Dante. You may think you know a…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 1 day, 1 hour ago
Goodreads keeps telling me that since I read Pride and Prejudice I should therefore read Twilight and I’ve never been so insulted in my life.
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Brea took several steps closer. She put a finger to her lips and shushed it. The typewriter sat still. Then, slowly, it typed out a s.
Then a h.
Then another h.
I love this.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
173 words
Her wide, innocent eyes were of a bluish purple, flecked with white as if some painter had dabbed their brush in white and flicked it with their finger. Then, some magical fairy had come and made all the spots glow like the stars in the sky. Her skin and hair were of similar shades of the bluish purple. Even her little boots…
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Okay, I wrote 500 hundred words. I won’t post them here though because they’re part of a story I plan to post soon of The Baron Chronicles topic and I really don’t want to spoil what happens in this story.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 2 hours ago
(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮 nothing against girls being cool, just the trope is over used and I am more surprised when it turns out to be a male rather than a female.)
My least favorite part about this trope is the girl almost always has eyeliner on. Or they’re…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
Yay!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
You’re so welcome xD
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 3 hours ago
*gasp* It’s a date!
Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??
When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…
I would like to know as well… 🤣
Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story ὄ…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 3 hours ago
Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]
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