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@ellette-giselle I really gotta get caught up, the past few days I haven’t been able to read them (been using my allotment of screen time for other things)

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)

Yup. Another reason for proofreading.

If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be hap…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Book feedback for you!

Sector 5 Book Feedback

@whalekeper

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

Well actually yeah, pretty much! 😅😆 Siblings or (school) friends lolol.

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.

I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

@hybridlore

I have added my feedback to your file!

@ellette-giselle

I’m scared for them…

@ellette-giselle

Ellette!! What are you going to do to them!? 😳

@whalekeeper

Don’t worry, I didn’t think you were frustrated. But yeah, we can discuss it for fun if you want, even if just to help you figure out why you believe what you believe. Probably on a separate forum from here, though.

@ellette-giselle

Oh boy…

Those were great. Didn’t really see anything that needed to be fixed. I like how we get to see both sides of it now.

@theducktator

That’s crazy, honestly I wish I could do that XD

@ellette-giselle

Actually, finding faceclaimes on pintrest is really hard because I rarely find one that looks like my character.

ME TOO THOUGH

Sometimes it’s so obvious, like I find one exactly like one of my characters, but I still haven’t found one that looks like Lilitu or Sef 😭

@savannah_grace2009 yessss it’s been so long, I was recently thinking about ya! I’ve been doing well!

And that’s cool with me, whenever you start up on the story again I’ll be there!

@KEILAH-H

HI GIRL IT’S BEEN SO LONG SINCE WE’VE TALKED hahaha

how are you!?!?

I’d loveee to talk to you sometime soon…hopefully I’ll be releasing new chapters soon and I’ll for sure be needing your thoughts and opinions <3

I think I figured out the main problems and I know where I’m going now, but I’ll for sure tag you if and when I need…[Read more]