@theducktator
Active 1 month ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@hybridlore I think the girls are taken but not to be soldiers. More like strategists and informants.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Yes, I think he’s going to do that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers. This is a strong part of the world building, so it’s nice to get a deeper look into it.
Is it just boys who are taken, or are there girls too? Because I feel like you might have mentioned something about there being a girl at the rehab center but I hav…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I commented after I finished the third one. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
Alright, we’ll see if he responds!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper ahhh okay that makes sense
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
If you don’t think it’s a comparable scenario, I’d be curious to know why.
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m not going to dig myself too far into this convo. But the way I see it, the government is torturing the inhabitants of the city. They’re literally killing kids. So… I don’t know what to say, other than to pose the same situation in front of you and ask you what you would do. There’s no peaceful way to deal with this, and…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I feel like I’m bad at explaining this…. is it making sense? Or am I just making the world more confusing at the moment….. XD
I think I get what you are saying. Christians should rebel and take on the government if it is the only means to protect their families. That was also an argument in your friend’s essay on violence: Fathe…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic I need assistance ✨✨ in the forum Characters 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 Awesome!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I find it very entertaining that some of you on here have written several projects since we met. And then there’s me, who has been working on the SAME BOOK since I joined, somehow without any side quests lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I need assistance ✨✨ in the forum Characters 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Once the others email me back, I’ll see if I have any more nagging questions or things that stump me that I might need your help with haha
I already have your email soooo I’ll just email you when I’m ready!!!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Very sorry for not replying soon. Work picked up again, and I’ve been wasting the free time I have.
Wow!! That was fast!
Heh heh. I had a lot of free time to read during long drives.
I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I t…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
Okay. Maybe I will wait a bit and give you some more time to get through to them.
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whaley replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
XD It means the message got into his inbox. I think. Normally, all the moderators have something like @kingdompen.org for their email addresses, and that address does not work. Deus Lamb, however, is part of Story Embers and has another address.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months ago
Yeah I know. I’m the kind of person who tries something over and over, even when it’s hopeless.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
I sound like Wrecker with that sentence lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
@everyone
I messaged Deus Lamb, and I did not get a “returned to sender”! I’m waiting to see if he’ll respond.
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Don’t worry about it. 🙂 One of my pet projects has been a thing since 2020, through all my teen years. It’s not that big of a deal.
And if you wanted to try a sidequest without getting too distracted, I highly recommend writing short stories! They clean your creative palette if you’re stuck.
My problem is that my brain loves creating complex backstories and plots and just developing and overthinking what I have so far XDXD I love exploring a story from every angle I possibly can, which, I think, is why I have a history of changing all my projects WAYYY too much without ever finishing a draft loll
Maybe I’ll try to write one…though…[Read more]
Reimagining and deepening backstories to the point of overwhelming yourself… relatable. XD I have a hard time limiting the scope, if that makes sense. My biggest strength is tying stuff together with characters, so the world could not be explored to the same depth with any other characters besides the protagonists. But sometimes it feels like t…[Read more]
Like right now I am dying over this short story draft. I can’t figure out the characters for the life of me; there’s an extra dimension I’m missing. Idk, maybe I’m expecting too much from only one week of writing them.