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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

With all that said, I still am trying to figure out all that I believe and why I believe it on these issues. This is also why I want to hear what you have to say for your side, to see if I should maybe reconsider my side, as I am doing with passifism. And maybe in exchange, I can give you a few things to think about…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

As for the church leaving… they did. They left the city, but there is no place to run to, and while they did go underground, there is still the fact that 1. the will be discovered, it’s only a matter of time, and 2. evil is running rampant and unchecked.

Okay, that makes sense.

Read the Crown and Covenant Tri…

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@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

If you wanted to, all…[Read more]

Random thought/note. I recently made a list of every character of mine… at least, that I could think of. I want to draw them all eventually. 🤤✍🏼 I have 606 characters. 400 are male and 206 are female.

hee hee

@theshadow

Yeah, it’s pretty cool!

And if you don’t enjoy rock, that’s fine. Sometimes certain genres bothers a person and they don’t know why. It’s just a fact of their life. Many country songs rub me off the wrong way, and I don’t know why. 🤷‍♀️

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

Synesthesia? That’s where a person has de…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Cries in a corner*

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers.

True.

It is also true, I forgot. We only have one female character so far. Other than what I call “extras.” And she isn’t from the city, so we have a POV blind spot, so to speak.

@keilah-h

Huh. I guess that would make sense.

Ellette, if that’s true, maybe make that clearer?

@hybridlore I think the girls are taken but not to be soldiers. More like strategists and informants.

@ellette-giselle ^^

Yes, I think he’s going to do that.

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers. This is a strong part of the world building, so it’s nice to get a deeper look into it.

Is it just boys who are taken, or are there girls too? Because I feel like you might have mentioned something about there being a girl at the rehab center but I hav…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I commented after I finished the third one. 🙃

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Alright, we’ll see if he responds!

@ellette-giselle

Wow. This is getting intense.

Good chapters!

@whalekeeper ahhh okay that makes sense

If you don’t think it’s a comparable scenario, I’d be curious to know why.

@linus-smallprint

I’m not going to dig myself too far into this convo. But the way I see it, the government is torturing the inhabitants of the city. They’re literally killing kids. So… I don’t know what to say, other than to pose the same situation in front of you and ask you what you would do. There’s no peaceful way to deal with this, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I feel like I’m bad at explaining this…. is it making sense? Or am I just making the world more confusing at the moment….. XD

I think I get what you are saying. Christians should rebel and take on the government if it is the only means to protect their families. That was also an argument in your friend’s essay on violence: Fathe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Awesome!