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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, Nia probably won’t be huge to the whole story, so that’s good.
I know the young thief is common, but I guess I just wanted to try it out for myself, and just see where it went. As far as I’ve planned out (which is very, very little), he doesn’t stay a thief for long, but it kinda follows him in the long run, if that makes sense.
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
If reality is simply the state of existing, what specifically is existing? Is it everything within the universe? Is it everything that is self aware? If man is uniquely created in the image of God, does that not mean that God takes the image of a man, and therefore is distinguished from reality? Is that even meaningful to ask, are…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol
Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:
Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Abelard seems cool. His dynamic is certainly interesting. As for the quote from Hitler, I am pretty sure it came from a letter. I did get to read an excerpt of Mien Kampf in Euro for a primary source analysis and let’s just say that Hitler’s mind is not a very good place.
Karci sounds very intriguing! It…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Emotions are definitely interesting. You can’t just think all the time, “how would I feel?” because not all people respond the same way as others. So it definitely requires you getting to know your characters…
Oh, and Mary Sue makes a lot more sense now lol.
I, unfortunately, have yet to read much by Brandon Sanderson. I do…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣
Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else
Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
👍!!!
Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks!! 😊 They definitely are!
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Warning: existential rant incoming, only read if your comfortable with these harder subjects.)
(Warning acknowledged.)
Then one must ask, what caused reality itself?
(The definition of reality I’m using here is “the state of existing”. Just to be clear.) Perhaps there are two kinds of realities: the reality that has always been,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@janellebelovedpig @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else-and-the-people-I’m-probably-forgetting 😅
Okay, y’all, so I know this is kinda long (and also I have way to many novel ideas), but this is the first chapter to a book I’ve been thinking about. So… I figured I’d just share it to…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
I can agree that I feel like it is sometimes best not to redeem characters. I will say that I do think Hans will be a very good villain (and I feel he will probably have a good arc).
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76
@thearcaneaxiomHere is another of my MCs in the first book.
Karci, owns a metalworking shop along with her husband Kien. She resents the Karpentan government for the economic problems facing the country (and herself). She believes that Karpenta needs to be returned to its former glory by ‘returning t…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Yeah, I think it’s a good summery. It feels like the word curiosity doesn’t give a complete connotation though.) I’m not sure, perhaps there are different degrees of what curiosity is? Does that stray from the heart of a question? (I would say that curiosity is the right word, but it just feels less driven to me for some reaso…
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! As are all the ones I’ve seen from you so far!
Yw!! 😄
Aw, thanks so much!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Yes! They’re slowly becoming my favorite characters, I’m becoming obsessed 😂😂😂
Lol. I think every author becomes obsessed with their charries at some point or another. 😂😂
@awsumfaith @freedomwriter76 @otherworldlyhistorian @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @acancello @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom
So… I know most of y’all know a lot abo…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Is that not perhaps the definition of a desire for a deeper understanding? Does there still feel like there’s something missing though?
(Curiosity sums it up pretty well, in my opinion.) Do you think there’s something missing?
(It was in Maine, most of them weren’t immigrants, they were Polish citizens still. MathCamp, while bei…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @gwyndalf-the-wise @princessachronicle22 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @keolah-h and anyone I missed
thank you all so much!!!
To answer all of your questions-
Due to my skill set at the moment, I only due and will probably forever mostly do digital art, because I have to use templates and trace and such as of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’m curious to know what happens with Asher and Ev’s relationship! (Asher’s betrayal is my favorite arc in your book)
Yes, me too! Lol. The conflict definitely doesn’t end in book one. (Let’s just say that maybe Asher was partially lying about his motives for turning them in… 😏)
I like it! I think the pacing…
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
@awsumfaith, I love Ridge and Anika!! 😍 They’re my favorites of your charries! They sound so cute together!!
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @whalekeeper @loopylin
Like always, y’all’s charries are ✨amazing✨!! 😉 😄
Imma post my charries soon!! (Soon, as in later this evening or tomorrow. …
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
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