@thearcaneaxiom
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom ooh I remember that scene, that was a really good show.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper
k, here’s a new part.
@calyhuge @otherworldlyhistorian @thearcaneaxiom @linus-smallprint
Apologies for tagging y’all. Hope you don’t mind. I’ve started employing the advice y’all gave me, and I wanted to see what you fella’s think before I go any farther with it. Does Aaron still seem like a guy. I mean, would…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 2 weeks ago
This is great! You gave me a good picture here! That scene with Simon on the water and Eden in the water were my absolute favorite!! OH MY GOODNESS! They were amazing! With all the help I have gotten here and on my WIP I must say that if Aaron does not turn out there perfect character it’s because can’t write. lol.
Thank you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @theloonyone @stephie @theshadow @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian
Awesome! This is perfect.
Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 months, 2 weeks ago
These are guys I can remember at the moment. (Sorry if any people didn’t want to be tagged)
@calyhuge @thearcaneaxiom @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian
Ellette would love some feedback on the scene above, It is about a male character in grief, and it’s mostly troubleshooting at this point.
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Linus Smallprint started the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 2 weeks ago
As authors, we have characters who are both male and female, but sometimes it is hard to get into the heads of our characters who are the opposite gender from us. These characters sometimes turn out in very strange ways and we get Mary Sues or overly emotional guys – characters no one really likes. This forum is for guys and girls to ask each…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Rivals!!!! in the forum Characters 6 months, 2 weeks ago
You tagged me, but this never came up in my email, so sorry for the late response😕
That’s okay, thanks for answering anyway!
There can also be the kind of rival where one is trying to pull the other towards their way of thinking. What comes to my mind is the villain troupe where they tell the hero “where not so different you and I…
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Just tagging everyone I did last time… 🤪
@theducktator @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @whalekeeper @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @grcr @rae @loopylin @acancello @keilah-h @hybridlore @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @everyoneee
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 7 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @calyhuge @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @esther-c @trailblazer @jonas @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @linus-smallprint @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 (Hope you guys don’t mind the tag)
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TheShadow replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 1 week ago
I don’t have much to add since @thearcaneaxiom points were really good (nice job!)
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whaley replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I agree with every single thing you said. 🙃 And thank you, I’m glad you agree with me that she’s looking for some recognition.
What I would ask is who is she trying to get approval from?
I don’t know her family too well, but I’m sure she realizes her parents wouldn’t have a good reaction to so much serious material in her work.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Ok, I’ve been playing around with the front cover to The Space Between Us. What…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Would anyone like to see the cover of my newest book I’m about…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One started the topic Do You Use Fantasy Maps? in the forum Fantasy 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I need to settle a debate.
So, my brother and I often read fantasy series together. (He is making me clarify. We read them at the same time, not literally together.) Recently, we got into an argument about whether it’s normal to regularly reference the maps in the front as you read. So, he suggested I ask here. I almost never use the maps,…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, Tlavian it is! XD why are you so good at this!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay great!!!
I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks for the help, that was really thought provoking. What you said about the relationship with darkness was interesting, I’ll have to think about that more.
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