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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Thank you for clarifying 😅 I probably explained that in the most convoluted way possible lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!
I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.
Sorry this…[Read more]
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hanako replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Nice to meet you.
Well…non-fiction in the sense that I like to write about my thoughts on American government and real world topics.
I’m working on a essay called American Leader. It’s about the qualities a leader should have and how those qualities are developed. What do you think are leaders born or raised?
One is a whole…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Yes, I agree with that as well. I’ve grown up in a charismatic church, so I also believe Holy Spirit still speaks to us today, and I do agree that feeling or sensing the Holy Spirit is different that our own emotions and feelings, and yes, it is a process of discernment to distinguish between the two.
And going back to the…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
I wanted to add some thoughts on the question of discerning truth. I agree with Whaley’s assessment, because if we are constantly making decisions based on how we feel, we’re headed down a dangerous path. Feelings and emotions don’t last; we may feel something one day and the next day have a totally different feeling…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Quick question: is the ‘Tai’ in Tailen pronounced like in ‘Thailand’, or like in ‘potato’?
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Kathleen replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Dude! This is incredible!
With how immersive the world and writing style is along with how much intrigue and mystery was jam-packed into this excerpt, I’m blown away! Why didn’t you tell me you were this good at writing?!
The first section was actually breathtaking. I could feel each word as if they came alive within my body and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
A few of your questions sparked some thoughts, so here ya go 😝
Do we discern truth based off of what feels right, or what has more logical substance? (More and more Christians I meet seem to prefer the latter in the form of Sola Scriptura, but many others say we should also judge by the Spirit, so I thought it would spark an…
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Kathleen replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey! How’s it going?
I was just catching up on the most recent posts on this Apologetics forum as there always seem to be interesting conversations brewing here.
I’m totally down to continue our previous conversation or move to a new one (the questions you asked in your most recent posts are quite fascinating) do you have any…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
The “tail end”??How many stories will there be in each era??
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I agree with what other people are saying: very intriguing and somewhat confusing (though the intentional sort.) I don’t have any specific comments right now, but it seems really cool so far. For context’s sake, is this part of the Septrum, or is it its own thing?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I love this! Though it does get confusing, it’s the “good” kind, lol, and I would totally read the book.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Wow, I really love this!! The concept is definitely something I could never pull off, so great job there. And the characters were completely relatable. You’re very good at conveying emotions in your writing – something I still struggle with a lot, because I don’t do it well irl either lol. Anyway, awesome job!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
The Wraith. It’s literally, like, my worst nightmare.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I love this so far. It definitely is confusing, but the good kind that makes you hungry for more.
Oh man. That place where Tailen is… I’m panicking just thinking about it right now 😅
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I’ll definitely read it, but it will be at least a few hours before I have time!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Hi! Saw this topic and wanted to check it out! It’s really interesting so far!
I think in the beginning, the style of the writing was kind of confusing. Overall it does give the idea of like, very choppy thoughts, sort of less established, so if that’s what you were going for, then great job. I just think that it might throw…[Read more]
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Brianne replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Hi there! I think I would probably lean more toward the soft worldbuilding category, but I’m a pretty healthy balance of both I’d say.
As for learning languages, I don’t try learning many, but I’ve been learning Danish on and off for about a year now (I can never practice, though, so I’m not very good at all).
I’ve tried a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
So based off of the language that you were going to help me create, can you help me devise a word in Andromedan for “Mother”? That would be most appreciated, haha. I am not good at creating languages, so I’m stumped, lol.
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Aranel replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Hello! Nice to meet you! What sort of sci-fi/fantasy have you read? (Most important question: have you read Lewis’s Space Trilogy?)
Worldbuilding. . . . probably more hard worldbuilding, though it depends on what I’m writing. For my current project, definitely hard worldbuilding.
My WIP is kinda complicated, but here’s the b…[Read more]
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