@thearcaneaxiom
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
My favorite is Chromancy.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@to-whom-it-may-concern
If it’s okay, I’d like to add some characters. They’re all from the same WIP, but they don’t know each other.
Vyette
She’s an earth elemental. She is fairly tall, at 5′ 9”, and has medium brown skin, green eyes, and black braids streaked with green. Her father is the (rich) vice president, and she is an arrogant snob…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 6 days ago
As a reader, is this a direction you would be satisfied to see the story take?
Yes
What do you think of the character development you see in this (specifically for Alan, Martha, Eric, and Cyrus)?
Seems solid.
Now that you’ve seen some more, what are your thoughts on the similarities between Eric and Kalmar?
I think it’s d…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I just found out there will be no more pennies.😭😭😭They were my favorite coin. RIP.
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
As are 95% of the people in the roleplay, lol. You’d fit right in :]
Lol, okay. I think I will add a couple characters there.
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks ago
It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?
Thanks!! Oh yes, that was so hard! I was going to keep it lighthearted and goofy, and then I was like, Hold on. And tried something a little different. 😛
Ummm… a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?
Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Well, never mind. I forgot she was a fire elemental, so now I have to rewrite the whole scene anyway. *facepalm*
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I can’t get my character out of a burning building. Help?
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I need to name 4 adults in their mid to late forties for a contemporary novel. Two men and two women. Any ideas?
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One posted an update 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Tomorrow, February 9th, is my 9th anniversary of marriage to Rainbow, “Sherby”, Sherbet, my seven foot stuffed caterpillar.
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Esther replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
No worries!! :))
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Esther replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Lol! Frfr 🤣
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