TheArcaneAxiom

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

True…but she’s funny. XD

@the_lost-journal

Carrot Cake is my favorite. XD

@the_lost-journal

I know, it’s still just a little bit creepy.

@the_lost-journal

Ah, ok, that’s cool!

Also, your signature is CREEPY.

@the_lost-journal

Cool, all your WIPs sound neat! So are TKOK and P.I.C.A.F.E. set on this earth?  How does that work with the fantasy elements?

@the_lost-journal

Lollll😂

Two strangers decide to go to couples counseling and see how long it takes the counselor to realize they don’t even know each other.

You know you’re a writer when you come back from camp thinking about all the people you met and what parts of them are going in a book. I can finally picture one of my character’s hair now!

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@ellette-giselle

The writerly urge to use random British expressions. XD

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@the_lost-journal

I think we just have different definitions of sacraments.

@thearcaneaxiom

*Steals your questions*

What do you think is the very most important element to the Christian identity? In other words, what tells you whether someone is a true Christian or not?

I would say you can tell if someone is a true Christian by whether they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The new one.

@loopylin

True. It’s small and cute though.