TheArcaneAxiom

@esther-c

Noooo, poor Tyler. 😭

“I’m not sure. I’ll have to discuss it with your dad first. Maybe we can talk about it during dinner.”

As much as Hallie hated to have a conversation like that over dinner in front of all her siblings

Hallie could feel the curious, snickering gazes of her five other siblings boring into the back of her head

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@freed_and_redeemed

Poor Riker. I hate Franz.

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow @trailblazer

A lot of this is actually first draft material since I was adding in stuff, so bear with me 🫣 But I didn’t want to keep y’all waiting. 😉

Chapter 10

“We’re not picking them up, right?” Easton watched Hallie through the rear view mirror.

“No, they’ll mee…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Ryla

Ryla stopped as she heard loud chatter. Maybe if she just stood against the wall and stared at the floor people wouldn’t notice her. Suddenly a boy shrieked and fell over her foot. Ryla started. The boy looked up at her.

“The floor… What a great place to delve in the deep depths of sorrow and ponder unanswered questions,” he…[Read more]

@rae

This had better not be Baron!

I’ve been wondering this too. One of my characters is in a similar predicament. Like Whaley suggested, she wrote letters to those she loved. Some of this will depend on whether your character is at peace with their death or not. *subscribes because I’m stuck too*

@theshadow

Ooh, okay that’s a good idea. I’ll try that, do you have any book suggestions?

Yes! Let’s see…

• Anything by Robin Jones Gunn — she’s literally my favorite author ever and I absolutely love her writing. I’ve heard mixed opinions on her books (some saying they’re cheesy or unrealistic) but it think they’re really good. If you don’t like…

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@whalekeeper

That first one is soooo true. XD

@linus-smallprint

Lucky. I wish we got more snow. It’s been in the 70s today. Beautiful, but I want to go sledding.

@kathleenramm

Are you still letting in new people? What’s happening? Are you alive?

@the_lost-journal

Nice! I hope it works!

@keilah-h

Thanks!

@the_lost-journal

Sorry for taking so LONNNGGGG to reply!

Well now we’re even because I took FOREVER to reply as well!! 🤣 So sorry!!! 😭

Oh, yeah I should’ve mentioned that! About how mega churches are almost always portrayed badly. (Ofc there are some awful mega churches.) But what I mean about “giving them a good church experience” is truly b…

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@savannah_grace2009

Yes, of course girl!! <333

@the_lost-journal @keilah-h

I wonder if we could get someone more active promoted to a moderator. We’d have to get the attention of an existing moderator to do so, but it seems like it would be helpful.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! <33

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in ou…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Wyoh apparently doesn’t like to notify me when you tag me 😑 Anywayyyy Loved the scene! But also feel so bad for Riker!! 😥

@the_lost-journal

Oh cool! Awesome!!

@linus-smallprint

Now I need to go shovel.

Did you get snow???