TheArcaneAxiom

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳  Nice lizard! How old are you now?

@theducktator

*gasp* It’s a date!

Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…

I would like to know as well… 🤣

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@savannah_grace2009

Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]

@rae

Probably Baron himself. I love Rya though; she’s adorable.

@rae

I just read through all of this and enjoyed it immensely. 😃 I love your characters so much!

@koshka

 Liko could get stuff done, right? The fellow certainly had enough hands.

*snorts*

@loopylin

Ooh, I like Terry. The problem with names from this era is that so many of them are taken by adults I know. XD

@keilah-h

Not that I hate that, but I don’t love it either. I want them to just beat the bad guys already.

Exactly. I want it, but only as a subplot, not as the main thing.

@whalekeeper

Ugh. The series was good through book 6, but the romantic drama has kind of taken over, and I don’t think Shannon Messenger has any idea what she’s doing anymore.

@whalekeeper

Agreed. I do think she and Keefe are cute together though. I just wish it would stay a side plot.

@whalekeeper

Yeah. *sigh* I think Fitz ought to die. He only seems to exist for romantic drama at this point.

@ellette-giselle

Don’t worry, Rory is well loved.

That is precisely when worry is needed. The worst things happen to the best loved characters.

I can’t break the rules of the story just because I love a character. I hate it when authors do that.

Same. KotLC used to be one of my favorite series, but there have been 9 books, the stakes are sup…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor kid.

@anyone

I need names for 4 adults in their mid-forties/early fifties for a contemporary novel. Any ideas?