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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Livia
Liv sighed, letting him hold her for a few seconds.
“I’m sorry…I know I haven’t been the best friend,” she pulled out her phone and showed him all the unread and unanswered messages. “I haven’t had the motivation to do anything lately.”
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
“Live, Laugh, Love. If that doesn’t work, Load, Aim, Fire.” -A bumper sticker I saw
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 4 days ago
*screams* I use the guinea pig analogy all the time! I’ve struggled with school and my mom can’t help me because she doesn’t know what she’s doing, but now my siblings are in those grades and mom can actually help them! How many younger siblings do you have?
Am I the only one here who has never wanted an older brother?
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m also tired of the “oh no it’s cold we’d better snuggle together for warmth” trope. Dress for the weather!
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
or example, in the series I’m reading, seven books have passed and the heroine has finally realized her crush likes her back. The hints were agonizingly obvious. He was giving you gifts, girl. He initiated a unique telepathic connection with you. His friends have openly joked about your feelings for each other.
Keeper of the Lost Cities?
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m pretty sure I have more, but here’s nine.
- NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.
- Love at first sight. It’s not love, it’s just attraction.
- Why are…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Lukas
“No.”
Lukas ran his tongue over his lips. At least he got a clear answer. He had heard from his brothers before that girls would say they were fine when they actually weren’t. If Livia hadn’t answered that way, then that must mean she really wasn’t okay.
“Why?”
By Liv’s expression, that was definitely not t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
1: love triangles. I find them incredibly unrealistic and often ridiculous.
😭
jk jk. XD I personally don’t mind them if they’re done right. 😉
2: no communication. The entire plot should not be able to be resolved with a 5 minute conversation. Like seriously. This may be a problem in real life, but do I want to real a full 300+ pages abo…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Livia
“Livia, are you okay?”
She blinked hard, still refusing to make eye contact.
She formed the moisture into the form of a horse, letting it gallop around on her palm.
She missed Xandro.
She let the water fall off her hand and into the churning waters below.
Finally, she let out a shuddering sigh, and turned to face…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ohhhh yeah I understand!!!
Still, I change my book so many times that I’m used to it lollll
YAYYYYYYYYY I’m so excited!!!!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Hehe, thanks 😁😊
Lukas
Lukas watched as Livia played with water between her hands. He was captivated for only a moment before his eyes roved to her face. A listless, wandering look swam behind those bright blue pools.
Lukas knew it would be be easy for her with Xandro not being there–although that was good news for him. He…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Aww, thanks!! 🥰
Sometimes it is for me, but in this book’s particular case, it needs some bigger edits (not like a whole revamp), and I didn’t feel like digging through that. XD
Yeah totally!! I’m hoping to create a topic for it soon! (Which reminds me…you posted something new on your WIP topic that I need to read!!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Naw, you’re good! I haven’t touched that one in a while actually. It’s a completed first draft, I’ve just been too scared to edit it. 🫣😂 I’m actually drafting a contemporary NA romance that starts in the Midwest but mostly takes place in ✨i t a l y✨. I started it in November, but I’m not even halfway through yet. I didn’t make writing…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I want to, but I’m not sure my mom will let me, because school is starting again.
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Esther replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Heyyy!!! 👋
How’s your WIP going??? Is it still the one in New Mexico (sorry I feel so behind on everything here lolll)
Naw, you’re good! I haven’t touched that one in a while actually. It’s a completed first draft, I’ve just been too scared to edit it. 🫣😂 I’m actually drafting a contemporary NA romance that starts in the Midw…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I signed up and I’m sooooo excited!!!! Hey maybe I’ll be on the same team as you guys, that would be so fun!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Awww Lukas is so cuteeeeee! I love himmm
Livia
“Hey, Liv.”
Lukas crossed the courtyard, his hands in his pockets, a blush creeping into his cheeks.
It had been so long since they’d talked…she’d been in her own world lately and though she hated to admit it, she was doing it again. Shutting the people out that she loved the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@everyone (I’m too lazy to actually tag people, LOL XD)
I hath dire need of thy input! ☝️
What are your romance pet peeves?
Yep, it’s just that question. (not irl, of course, but in fiction, lol)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Hi Esther!!! I haven’t talked to you in foreverrrr!!!
How’s your WIP going??? Is it still the one in New Mexico (sorry I feel so behind on everything here lolll)
My WIP is actually going really well, idk what it is about winter but I can always write the best in winter lol
Idk why
The vibes are just right I guess *shrugs*
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Thanks so much!!! <33
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