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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him, lol. He’s also exaggerating a bit here, since he was…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I mean, technically Ottoline didn’t scorn/belittle him, she was just having a panic attack because she’s been hurt before. She wasn’t mad, she was just afraid of him. (I know it’s probably just how Ellis thinks, I just think it’s funny that he feels that way.) Also, Ottoline kind of does care, she already tried to fight the queen….so….
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
”This queen is a murderer,” declared Nahim.
Ellis looked up. “Not yet she’s not,” he said, “And I’d rather it stay that way. You’re right. We keep trying. Have you talked to any of these people before? We need to see who’s willing to work with us.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis stared sulkily around the room, resting his chin on his arms. Didn’t any of these people care that they were going to be sent to their deaths? He had tried to help. Tried to convince them to work together. He was the only one who seemed concerned about their fate, and how did they treat him? So far, he had not only been scorned…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
No problem!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, I got to go get ready for school. Bye guys!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Montana is the coldest state except Alaska, right? We have had pretty warm winters the last few years (sadly) so I find it odd that there’s such a difference between Wisconsin and Montana. Montana isn’t too much farther North.
I don’t know if it’s the coldest or not, but probably? Cut Bank, a town in Montana has the record for coldest spo…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Idk. I guess we didn’t get much detail about the feast. Like, are there people other than our characters there? I was thinking that the queen might wait to give them more information afterward, but yeah, I don’t really know.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Btw, @hanako were you still planning on adding Leon?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @everyone
Okay, we’re back to the dining hall. (Well, Ellis went back and I’m assuming Nahim followed. Zahlin is still on his way to the armory, but he’ll probably be back soon, since he won’t have anyone to interact with.) Sorry if it w…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Haha I think if they had met under different circumstances, Zahlin might have actually liked Ellis.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol, they are not good for each other!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol Ellis put Zahlin in a bad mood too. Well, an even worse mood.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @mineralizedwritings
Ellis
Ellis fumed. What was wrong with these people? Why was Nahim the only person capable of carrying on a civilized conversation?
Ellis whipped around and strode back towards the hall. Why did he even bother to try to help? Didn’t anyone want to get through this alive?
He sat down sullenly in…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
KP ate my post 🤦♀️
Zahlin
This man was insufferable. First he refused to answer his question, then he demanded more answers?
“I suppose you expect to be able to defeat an army of dragons with a group of untrained, unarmed children.” He snarled, “I would like to get back to my world, preferably with all my parts functioning properly. And I’d…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I get that. When it goes from 40 to 80 to 60 it’s kind of annoying, it did that here too. I love fall, so I wish we could get 40-50 degree temps for a while and enjoy fall before snow. Because when the snow melts, all the leaves will be gone and it will be a muddy mess.
Hopefully the snow doesn’t last long! I’m ready for it to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Montana is the coldest state except Alaska, right? We have had pretty warm winters the last few years (sadly) so I find it odd that there’s such a difference between Wisconsin and Montana. Montana isn’t too much farther North.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I don’t want it to be 80 lol. This is supposed to be fall, not summer! That was also just one day. It’s been in the 40s a lot, but today it’s in the 60s. I would like a steady decline in temperature, not jumping all over the place!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Well….usually Montana winters are really harsh. The winds are terrible, blowing about 30 miles per hour making about 4 foot drifts in our yard. And when you have to go 25 on the highway, it’s just kind of ridiculous.
I mean, the snows pretty and I like snow, just right now it’s a lot and really, really cold. Though I suppose I should be…[Read more]
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