TheArcaneAxiom

@keilah-h

Ok, so yeah, GRCR and Hanako left, so Flaz Lane and Leon are gone. We still have Nahim, Nora, Ellis, Kate, Zahlin, Ottoline, Hugo, Kari, and Snake, ofc (I think that’s everyone?).

We just started the next day. Everyone is in the hall eating breakfast, I think. Fennin will tell ppl what to do afterwards.

Svlys

Svlys attempted – and failed – to keep a straight face. “Compound fracture?” She snickered, “Like, a broken bone?” She slipped her gun back into its holster. This man didn’t seem very threatening, though he seemed to think himself frightening.

“I’m terrified.” She said blandly, “Really, really scary.” She tried not to laugh again and fai…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@savannah_grace2009

He’s just too funny 🤣🤣

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@freedomwriter76 @smiley @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-really-(:

Some of my own memes 🤭 (sry if they’re blurry 😬)

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness, that worst writer one is one of my favorites. 😂

@thearcaneaxiom

So this is essentially a Naln and Szeth character.

(I’m assuming you meant ‘Nale’? I think you combined ‘Nale’ and Taln.) Yeah, I think it might have been largely subconscious on my part, but I definitely see the similarities. What I find intriguing about my character is the differences from Nale or Szeth. The scene is obviously…[Read more]

@jonas

Wow 😮

@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t had time to read it yet, but one thought that immediately comes to mind is, if you’re still doing multiple POVs, is first person perspective the best option? I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist. I’m mainly wondering if you had a specific reason for changin…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

Lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

Lol