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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I wonder if it will count if we just tie it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
We’re at 11 again!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae no, not at the moment.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂
At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Just three more people!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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HighScribe replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
NOOOOOOOO!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
We’re back down to 10!!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Were already so close!
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow, ten ppl are on rn?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
5?!? Wow. Impressive. We usually eat around 7:00-7:30 XD
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
So if the jungle dragon is coming now, should it have 1 or 2 regular dragons with it? Just for some extra challenge, especially since Snake is here.
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!
#LALBERT
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh yeah, that’s something I easily forget about. Thanks for reminding me! I’ll definitely keep that in mind as I write and edit. 😊
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Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009