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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?
A few…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years, 1 month ago
Your in our prayers! When things seem to be going astray, just don’t lose faith! The Lord loves you and your family so dearly, and has a plan for you. Whatever happens, just never forget to show the light you’ve already so humbly let shine to all those around you. You have such a sweet, gentle, and powerful spirit, and I know that the Lord will…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The long and tedious character naming process… in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, not at all. I was just thinking that it would make sense that his name as a whole maintained the same roots, so I stuck with Indian origin. It could be intentionally not of the same origin, representing a foreign evil that took root in him, although that sounds like it would become more of a cultural commentary, which I’m…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Did you know only one of the 56 founding fathers was a member of the clergy?
(Nup, but it makes sense to me, as too many would likely lead religion to become too politically involved.)
(Also in addition Jefferson was a very interesting person religiously speaking and just in general. As his beliefs are a bit complicated I’m just g…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
“As for Jesus of Nazareth, my Opinion of whom you particularly desire, I think the system of Morals and his Religion as he left them to us, the best the World ever saw, or is likely to see; but I apprehend it has received various corrupting Changes, and I have, with most of the present Dissenters in England, some Doubts to h…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Hey sorry for not getting back to you sooner! I was in bed sick and my brain was certainly not in the mood for deep discussions in question form! I’m feeling much better now, so we’ll see how this goes.)
(No worries! I’m glad your feeling better!!!)
(Geometry is definitely a puzzle piece to reality. (love the pun there.)) Do not all p…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
(I ended up not having enough time, lol, but here it is now:) )
Liren
A strange knowing emanated from Kirrtes when the woman walked up. She held a calculated look. Her grey blue eye gaze turned towards the blade I bore.
“Well hello there!” The man beside me said, “So what’s your name?” Namal stood silent, w…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Love Viola btw, I somehow missed her earlier, I’m excited to see where this goes!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I don’t think I have too much time right now, but I’ll try to do Liren’s really quick!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Help! I need a title! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Sounds fun! Good job for finishing it by the way! So it’s basically a spy adventure romance? I’ll think on that, is it also a comedy?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
This is so good! Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Purpose of Literature in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 1 month ago
Good luck on your thesis! That’s a really good question. I think that it’s a lot of things. It can be escapism from the real world, it can be thoughtful discussion, it could be an expression of self, all of the above. I think that readers will resonate with different things, as based around their own personal experience. I also think…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian
(So that was severely depressing. I was too committed to finishing my post last night, that I ended up typing it up until 2 in the morning, but I didn’t back it up, and it got deleted when I tried posting it😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. *Note to self: go to sleep*)
(Ok, from the beginning again)
(I’ve listened to the first…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Love Corvina! Can’t wait to do Liren’s!
Liren is tall, with simple dark hair and eyes. His clothes are disheveled and dirty, but made from sturdy fabrics and leathers. He is in his late 20’s in earth years. He holds Kirrtes in his left hand. Kirrtes is an unusually long one handed sword, with a reflective blade. It also has a r…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Thanks! I’ve just read some of your posts, and you make some great points as well!)
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(I was going through my list and reading plot summaries of musicals/plays when I came upon the Book of the Mormon musical after reading the plot summary I have the following questions)
Assuming you are a Mormon what is your opinion on The Book of the Mormon musical?
(I actually haven’t seen the Book of Mormon musical, though I do…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
What do you mean by degree of competence? Is not all of history a game where we must incorporate the fact that things have bias? Is prediction just a guess? Is it not good to read things that we don’t agree with to escape the danger of bubble communities?
??? Did anything I said contradict any of those questions? Are you j…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Help! I need a title! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
You didn’t tag me, but I’m here if you’d like any help.
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