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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Love it! I don’t have any major points or criticisms for this one, though I will ask why your calling it a galaxy and not a solar system?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Well…hello… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Nice to meet you, Welcome back!
I’m TheArcaneAxiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truths, and exploring that in my writing. My current project is a sci fi/fantasy universe I’m working on with my sister, where baseline physics operates in a completely different way.
Questions:
You mentioned you like learning…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(I have no idea)
*cries*
(No worries! What I was asking is to whether or not you think we live in a globally spherical space (potato), Euclidean space (donut), or a hyperbolic space (pringle). The food gives rough intuition of the shape of the surface we would live in, though it’s in reference to higher dimensional…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
That’s awesome that your doing better than before, I don’t know what you’ve dealt with in life, but I’m sure that it’s been hard, so I’m glad things have been going well for you today!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’m doing great! I actually just got back from helping a friend of ours move out of her house, so I’m a little exhausted, but glad we could do what we could. How about you?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Love it! I like the prisoner quote!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(I love this conversation, though I haven’t really studied polish at all, but there was a oddly large amount of specifically polish students when I went to MathCamp, they were great!)
(It depends what you are communicating.)
(This is true) Do you have any thoughts on my food question,…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Is a question simply an interrogative expression used to test someone’s knowledge? Or is it something much deeper? A challenge or defiance of some sort?
Would a challenge really be the deepest level? Could it simply be an expression of a desire to be given knowledge concerning a particular subject? If that is the heart of a question, then would t…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Love it!!!! Such good quotes to represent him!!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, sure! I would love to talk about your worldbuilding!
The biggest aspects of worldbuilding you’ve presented here I would say you’ve shown pretty well. It’s just part of the world, without making a point out of it or info-dumping, so well done as far as that goes! As for the worldbuilding itself, I do find it intriguing. You’ve…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for sharing!
I think I was able to follow along pretty well, there was a lot of context I didn’t have, but it was still digestible as a whole!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
If the pen is mightier than the sword, why do actions speak louder than words?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! 🙂
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.
Yep XD
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?
Who has tasted protons before?
What do protons taste like?
When did you taste said protons?
Where did you taste said protons?
Why did you taste said protons?
How did you taste said protons?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?
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