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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
(I wouldn’t know what to ask. 😂)
Sorry, did I make any sense, or did I sound like I was blabbering gibberish?🤣
Is the donut edible??
(Hmm, to ask if the donut is edible could actually be an interesting question. If it can be eaten, then that means that one must be able to exist outside of the fundamental domain, meaning the shape of t…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Makes sense to me, names are hard🤣
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Very interesting! Is Kyrah different from Kirah?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
(I actually asked this question earlier to Historian in the deceptive form of): Do we live on a potato, a donut, or a pringle?
(This is kind of a joke in topology and physics describing Euclidean and non Euclidean geometries, though that’s not all of them. I could also describe it entirely in donut form for fun, like a donut hole, a…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
That’s awesome that your taking some time off for yourself! We all look forward to seeing when you get back!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:
Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?
I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about it if you’re comfortable. If you’d rather not, I respect that too!) (AHHH. I almost forgot to put parenthesis around that. 😅…
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
I’ve learned a lot too! The discussions we’ve had have been so fun and edifying. I can’t wait to talk more soon, and maybe discuss this when you get the chance to listen to it. I really loved Saturday 3rd session, and all of Sunday’s were amazing! Can’t wait to hear any thoughts!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Welcome to KP! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I like math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and implementing that in my writing. I enjoy sci fi/fantasy and my WIP consists of a little bit of both.
Questions:
If pirates is your thing, do you like the more modern dramatized picture, or do you like to study actual history about…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
That’s awesome! No worries about the RP’s, it’s amazing that your able to take more time to serve our Lord!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
I love it!!! I haven’t read WingFeather, nor have I ever gotten into fan-fiction, but I could tell why you wanted to give the context to the song, it’s very beautiful. I don’t really have any criticisms, but you mentioned realism, and I would say that this has far more of a romanticized vibe, but in a really good and emotionally…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
That’s so sad, It’s awesome that your able to serve them though, you’re in our prayers!
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
You really have😀
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Oh No! I hope everyone is ok, we’ll keep you and everyone else over there in our prayers!
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Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
No worries! Yeah, you’ll be able to watch it whenever you’re able! The link I gave, BYUtv, and YouTube are probably the best ways to watch it during and after the live sessions, so there’s many ways to watch it any time!
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Unfortunately, our area just suffered a tornado, so I will not be able to watch it live, as we are helping with the damage. However, I will definitely watch it as soon as I am able. 🙂
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Oh No! I hope everyone is ok, we’ll keep you and everyone else over there in our prayers!
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Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
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Oh no! I’ll be praying for you! ❤️
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Thank you!!!
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That’s so sad, It’s awesome that your able to serve them though, you’re in our prayers!
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TheArcaneAxiom posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Can’t wait to discuss it if and when your able to tune in!
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TheArcaneAxiom posted an update 3 years ago
@felicity @otherworldlyhistorian @kyronthearcanin @folith-feolin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @sarahsmile @godlyfantasy12 @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise @freedomwriter76 (Whenever your back Freedom in case your interested) @anyone-and-everyone
Hi Everyone! As some of you have figured out, I’m a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day…[Read more]
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It looks great! Thanks for sharing! I’ll totally listen to it if I get the time. 🙂
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Can’t wait to discuss it if and when your able to tune in!
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Sounds cool sadly if all goes well I will be in New York watching Sweeney Todd during that time. If there is a way to watch it later I might check it out.
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No worries! Yeah, you’ll be able to watch it whenever you’re able! The link I gave, BYUtv, and YouTube are probably the best ways to watch it during and after the live sessions, so there’s many ways to watch it any time!
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Unfortunately, our area just suffered a tornado, so I will not be able to watch it live, as we are helping with the damage. However, I will definitely watch it as soon as I am able. 🙂
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Oh No! I hope everyone is ok, we’ll keep you and everyone else over there in our prayers!
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Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
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Oh no! I’ll be praying for you! ❤️
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Thank you!!!
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That’s so sad, It’s awesome that your able to serve them though, you’re in our prayers!
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Ok, thanks for the invite! 🙂
I’m glad I’ve been able to edify and encourage you in your faith! 😀
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You really have😀
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Thanks for this resource! I will try to check this out when I have time. I’ve appreciated our discussions and have learned so much from them. Thank you for your willingness to listen and your thoughtful responses!
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I’ve learned a lot too! The discussions we’ve had have been so fun and edifying. I can’t wait to talk more soon, and maybe discuss this when you get the chance to listen to it. I really loved Saturday 3rd session, and all of Sunday’s were amazing! Can’t wait to hear any thoughts!
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I did watch through the first session and was struck by the inspiring speaking. Also the choir was amazing.
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Yay! Which was your favorite speaker? I loved all of them, but I think Elder Eyring’s the most for the first session. Yeah, the tabernacle choir is beautiful, I think I take it for granted sometimes.
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Maybe Mr. Stevenson? I appreciated how he wanted to do something more meaningful with his family for Easter.
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@felicity
Yeah, I love Elder Stevenson!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Do you purpose a different definition of reality? Is existing the state of being real, and reality is something that is real/actual? (Wow I’m really confusing myself here. 😅 So I don’t think reality is everything that is self aware, at least, that’s not how I look at it. Self awareness is different. If I am unconscious, I am not self a…
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I did watch through the first session and was struck by the inspiring speaking. Also the choir was amazing.
Yay! Which was your favorite speaker? I loved all of them, but I think Elder Eyring’s the most for the first session. Yeah, the tabernacle choir is beautiful, I think I take it for granted sometimes.
Maybe Mr. Stevenson? I appreciated how he wanted to do something more meaningful with his family for Easter.
@felicity
Yeah, I love Elder Stevenson!