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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint While I did agree that Ellette’s concept of Joseph sensing evil in the temple was realistic, I can get behind you too when you say you don’t want to write about demons and such.
Personally, I think it all depends on the story. Your story has no need of it anyway, so it wouldn’t be wise to include it.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Tell me or I’ll start collecting dragon pics again!!!!!!!!(Old Character Party people will understand how horrible that is)
Jk. I was only curious, it’s not need to know. You can keepyour secrets.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@raxforge @grcr @loopylin @whalekeeper @jonas @ellette-giselle @hybridlore
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Pain. Brutus moaned as he lay on the ground, regretting greatly his decision to use that attack. Tears pricked at his eyes. The last time he had been hurt this bad was when he fought Max, but then, then his father was beside…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
You said ‘need’ a lot, does that mean you would only talk about death if you need to, not at any other time?
Yes.
And what time in a story would you believe it is a necessary time?
When a character does die. Characters die, there is no doubt about. Sometimes you need a character to die to improve another character’s ark. I’m just say…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
How many potatoes pfp do you have? Lol
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
As soon as Flare realized he was on the ground, he was up again ready to fight. Ben was a little slower but got up quickly. All the Ironwalkers were still on the ground, but they started to get up.
“Quick, back to the roof.” T…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Thanks 👍
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
So you wouldn’t write about death in any circumstance because it might offend people?
Not necessarily, it is okay to write about death in some senses, but in this case, I can’t see anything good coming from writing about death right now. If I need to offend people, I will. But I don’t see a need.
Do you find it unlikable to t…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@raxforge yay!
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore
Baron (Brutus)—with group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus sighed. Why did he even care? Here his body was tearing itself apart and he wanted to go back to help Flare and Ben and the boy.
Mustering his strength, Brutus got back up from where he lay, gritting his teeth as he…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
A conversation over text between me and @rae
Me: Ruth
Me: Ruth
Me: Ruth
Me: Ruth
Me: Ruth
Ruth: What is it?! What’s wrong?!
Me: Life or death question
Ruth: What?
Me: Do you want me to keep the sideburns or get rid of them?
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
Flare looked down from the roof top at the kid who just became unconscious as Ironwalkers surrounded him. He drew his sword.
“Flare don’t-” Ben didn’t finish his sentence when Flare jumped down. When he landed, he ran towards the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@raxforge @ellette-giselle I probably won’t do it either, but that’s just because I can’t think of anything that I could write for such a broad subject.
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I have decided not to participate this time around. My belief is that death should not be taken lightly. I cannot write about death that might make others feel uncomfortable or offended. I know people who have dealt with people dying and have seen them dying. That is something that that person has to deal with the rest of their…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@anyone who cares which will probably be nobody but ehh.
I have been learning to animate in Blender…..
and I believe I have partaken in one of the most glorious feelings known to man:
animating something and watching it move by itself, and thinking that this has been your greatest creation thus far.
Was this how God felt when he created…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
@the_lost-journal @theducktator I get into enough ruckuses with my 1 younger brother, anything more than that would be C R A Z Y.
Other than Kefa’s “My brothers probably hate me” problem, what’s it like?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
oh and you’re welcome for the feedback!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed oooh I like it!
have you already started the 3rd book?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh cool! yeah Tron’s soundtrack is a great one to have on in the background when you’re writing, or sometimes I put it on when I’m in the car on a long trip.
This is from the TV show, which was pretty god but only lasted like 1 season.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t think you’re playing with demonic powers.
Putting an actual detailed ritual by the Imperial priests could be, for example, but simply the mention that a pagan temple has an evil presence hovering over it is, if anything, as realistic as you can make it.
The music track? Oh, it’s funny cause it is a synth-heavy…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle what you said about the temple feeling evil to Joseph makes sense to me. I, personally, have never been to any form of pagan temple (not even the ruins of one, that I can remember anyway) , but honestly the very fact that I would be standing in what was once used for or currently used for the worship of a false god (especially if…[Read more]
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