Kefa

@liberty

THAT WAS AMAZING!!! Lol, that was so good, nice job!!

Write or die!!!!!

Will get to this. How many words is this, 50?

This sounds great!! I’ll have to ask my parents first, but I believe I should be free next Saturday.

@linus-smallprint

That’s okay. If your too busy don’t feel like you have to read this. Thank you for letting me know where you are.

Okay, thanks for understanding. Maybe once school winds down I could pick it up again.

@rae

I avoid doing it in front of my parents because…well, they think I’m crazy already.

And Andrew gets slightly worried that I’m mixing fiction and reality together.

Lol.

It’s a lot of fun! Just sometimes it gets a little weird…and some people might think that you’ve lost your marbles

Well, writers are insane anyway XD.

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@keilah-h

all righty! Which scene do you think would be best?

Hmm, the first one that popped into my mind is the one where they’re fighting the giant bread monster.

@grcr

That looks so good!!

@theducktator Phew, it wasn’t him! You saved me the trouble of an awkward conversation.

lollllll

@keilah-h

My charries who I talk to know they’re the special ones, so they know that I could never bear to banish them or do anything worse than give them a tragic experience, which I later have them conquer in their arc because I just can’t bear to leave them broken.

They know too much.

@theducktator

I used to have conversation with by…[Read more]

-The plot was good, I enjoyed what you have so far.

-I’d love to get a little more in depth on your worldbuilding, but you don’t need to do that, it’s just something I enjoy.

@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.

-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

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@highscribeofaetherium awww he’s cute!!

@theducktator

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”

Did that doctor look like this?

(just a sketch, not an actual portrait)

Cause I TOLD him I was gonna be nice and not let him get caught and convicted for malpractice, if only he behaved.

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I’m sorry, but I can’t do this. Thx for tagging me. Have fun!

@rae

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and pretty easy to understand

yay!

Yes, they were great! They aren’t the normal way people usually title chapters, and I really like that, it fits with the story well.

I was partially inspired by….I wanna say they were Percy Jackson chapter titles, but I don’t remember too well. I d…[Read more]

@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic

@keilah-h

As for the confusing aspect? Welp, if we’re talking the debacle with the Administrator, blame the original writers for any confusion, not me (trust me, I had to read through it like twice to write it properly, so you’re not the only one). The only places I’d be to blame are:

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and p…[Read more]

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

They kind of are XD

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually growls back or makes a stab of his own.

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@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]