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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 2 days ago
Well, this certain rude character, if they get too much on my nerves, will be the topic of a short story in which they DIE. That is how I deal with rude characters i dislike.
LOLLLLL
Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?
actually it’d be funnier if they did…..
SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 2 days ago
lol, really?
Yep. ever since my mom and I had a flour fight and she said I should put it in a story.
Oh… the reason why I was asking it is….. *sigh* things don’t really go his way this chapter… at least for a part of it.
(I think you are going to grow a hatred, or less a disliking, to a certain rude character…)
Oh dear……[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
Glad you liked it
BTW did you re-use the names Fen and Tren from that one RP we had a while back ago?
Lol, you noticed. Yes, I did.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.
funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!
haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!
So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.
Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.
in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
@rae awesome!!!!
Can’t wait for more!
Feedback time lol
Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion
You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:
…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 2 days ago
Oops, forgot to reply to your other question.
Yep, Robbie is mine! He was part of an old Historical Fic WIP.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 2 days ago
WAIT CAN YOU SEE INTO THE FUTURE?!
I am not kidding, there is a flour fight 😮 lol
lol, I KNEW IT!
It’s actually the first thing that pops into my mind when I put the words ‘charrie’ and ‘baking’ together.
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Andrew posted an update 1 week, 2 days ago
@rae you have 3939 posts! It’s a pattern! And @savannah_grace2009 your one post away from 2662! I need to find more patterns!
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Andrew replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
*joins in dancing*
I’ve already read most of them, but I’m still very happy that there making it on KP!
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Ruee Hamster Huey's profile was updated 1 week, 2 days ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 2 days ago
Uh oh, I have a feeling there will be a few flour fights with how terribly these teams get along amongst themselves. Lol, this will be great.
I can’t wait!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
First story!
Clash of Winds
he cold little mouth of a winter night nipped at Max’s nose. His cloak was wrapped tightly around him, woven of a thin soft fabric that yet provided all the warmth of a few blankets together. Its color was shown to be green in the flickering rays of the fire, with the insignia of a Royal Guard of Loria upon the b…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey started the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
The time has come.
I haven’t finished all of the short stories, but a good portion are done.
If you don’t know what The Baron Chronicles are, they’re my most recent writing project, an anthology of short stories telling a portion of the life of Baron, an assassin who turns away from his life of death to search for redemption.
I’ll be posting…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 2 days ago
Nice mood boards, very well done! 👍
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Andrew replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
LOL
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oh, cool!
slayyyy XDXD