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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:
- Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
- Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed yessss I will totally do that!!
now to find some songs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
I’m fine with it, but Baron is gonna lose his mind if you do that. lol
Oh you have no idea. Not only is it storming which increases his power, he’s also gonna have to go into fight mode.
I’m good with it
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
“How about, no.” Ben did not want to have to fight with more guards, “We should go out of the city, and stay out there for the night.”
Flare nodded with approval.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@raxforge @ellette-giselle @grcr
I’m gonna write a really short rp this time.
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Baron gently replaced his scarf, careful to make sure it covered the scar, before turning away so that his face was cast in shadow.
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Ben looked at the scar with interest, that is a scar of a story. But Ben wasn’t interested in a story now, he was too impatient. “Well now, that is a mighty fine scar you have, one with a great story. But of course, we don’t have time for i…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@raxforge @grcr @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Brutus suddenly sighed, looking tired. He pulled up his scarf again, having stopped attempting to arouse the guards. “Sadly, if I am not careful, I…” Brutus shook his head, turning to face Ben, before removing his scarf. Down…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @jonas @grcr
Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.
Sorry, I have been so busy and not been able to keep up with all the activity.
@ellette @Ruth @gcrc
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
“I have no objec…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Tenz and Reid
“I can’t go to anyone for help, Tenz. They would hurt me. So I’ll have to figure it out myself.”
Tenz’z smile faded and his voice dropped low in volume, looking at his twin. “Like… They?”
Reid stiffened, drawing in a breath. His pupils became thinner. “I-I wouldn’t know, Tenz,” Reid said hesitan…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.
Thx. Though, tbh, I’m usually not this bright. I think it’s just because I slept better last night than I usually do, lol.
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RAE replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 6 days ago
praying!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..
eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllllAnd I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!
also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)
“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”
Lol!
@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brut…[Read more]
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