The Happy Bookaholic

@Daeus oooh, that’s more like it. I don’t think that one necessarily (because it gives away the ending) but that’s definitely a whole lot more dynamic and deep.

@Daeus that does give off some pretty strong Native American vibes, just so you’re aware.

Salutations, @Glitter-Ocelot! You know your MBTI type. I like you already. *grins* Hello, and welcome to the realm of the KeePers of the Pen. I’m an INFP an I write just about anything speculative. Prefer fantasy right now, but really fantasy is such a broad term… eh… nevermind. 😛
Once again, welcome. What’s your favorite book? If you can…[Read more]

@Emma-Flournoy *scowls* Everything is possible. And everything is connected. So never say never. *scowls harder*

@Emma-Flournoy ha! Well, that’s definitely a symbol. 😛 *coughs* I was thinking though… ya know… like… time travel??*cough**cough*

@Daeus of the three I like the last one best, but none of them are really jumping out to me as worthy of the story. Is there something… less generic? Maybe something that more obviously says ‘time travel’?
All three of those also seem slightly forced, theme-wise. *scrunches self down in chair and trails off into unhelpful muttering* I don’t…[Read more]

@Emily
I agree with what everyone else said. Just change the names of the kids and maybe just don’t mention the location at all. Also, you could make the family only have 3 kids, unless the 4 children is a main part of the story. 🙂

@theacornman
No, I’m American. I wondered because my family visited England last summer. Do you live more in the country or city.

@theacornman
So…I have to ask. Where in Britain do you live?

@theacornman
Good to meet you! Your novel sounds very interesting! I also write fantasy. 😉 Can’t wait to get to know you better!

@his-instrument
THIS IS AMAZING!!! 🙂 A million thanks!

@Aratrea very slick. *thumbs up*

Hey, @seekjustice! I don’t believe we’ve met yet. I’m Ingrid (@ingridrd). This story sounds very intriguing! I would so love to read it, but unfortunately don’t have a lot of free time on my hands at the moment. 🙁

@Lady-PenDragon
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 What’s your favorite genre to write?

The bane of your existence is screen-time limits, because “writing should not count as computer time”!

*waves hand in air* MEEEEE!!!!!!

Here’s some more:
You know you’re a writer when you’re listening in on other people’s conversations and trying to remember everything they say.

You know you’re a writer when no one wants to watch a movie w…[Read more]

The bane of your existence is screen-time limits, because “writing should not count as computer time!
*waves hand in air* MEEEEE!!!!!!

Here’s some more:
You know you’re a writer when you’re listening in on other people’s conversations and trying to remember everything they say.

You know you’re a writer when no one wants to watch a movie with y…[Read more]

I’m thinking maybe you could do something with the dictator faking his death at some point…maybe? 😉

@josiahdeboer
Okay, first: what do you mean by “cycle continues”? Are you saying this cycle of the dictator assassinating himself and the son finding out keeps happening over multiple generations? Or am I confused?

@Graceofspades2017 whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛

Let me tag some others for you though.

@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @JosiahDeBoer

@Graceofspades whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛

Let me tag some others for you though.

@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @JosiahDeBoer