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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus @That_Writer_Girl_99 can I join you for a bit? I got permission to do some writing in the daytime and so I’m going to be working on my climax until around four. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 here… have a snippet to give you a few ideas.
That was it. They could do whatever they liked about him. But they were not going to touch Denholm. A murderous spark ignited at the base of his throat, and suddenly a great warm, eager humming swelled and filled his mind, pressing outward through the boundaries and seeking an…
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Sweet. I actually have something else I need to do for the moment, but I’ll be back in just a minute.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin @jess @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal I’ll be writing for an hour.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 ha! 😀 I can get on board with that… *stands heroically on the verge of a deserted island with the wind streaming through her hair and her weird Jedi robes* May the force be with you. 😛 😉
Ahhhh… yes. Elemental fight scenes. *laughs* I can so relate. The MC of my WIP is also a fire Elemental, though not in the same way…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well, any backstory you might want to fill in. Hints at the Warden’s involvement with the Elementals. (Which could also double as foreshadowing). Stories about the Catastrophes… little pieces of silence to fill in the things that Matthias knows, as a spy of the Warden, but isn’t allowed to tell the others. Just to deepen the…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Kate-Flournoy Yay!!! Oh, but how could dear, sweet little Evaleen possibly be a villain?! 😛
Actually, I can see it. I have what you might call a love-hate relationship with that girl. *glares at manuscript* 😉 We all have the ONE character that drives us bonkers.@That_Writer_Girl_99 I shall be wary. ;P
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Gracie replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 @Kate-Flournoy Thank you, guys. 🙂
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Gracie replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Hi, guys. I’d like to put in a prayer request for my mother. The past two months or so have been really rough for her on an emotional level, and the stress of homeschooling three kids in the middle-school to high-school range isn’t helping. If you could pray for God to give her peace and strength it would mean so much. And for me as well. I am…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 she could approach Matthias about it… but it would be better, I think, if you did end up having the sparring scene, and as she’s walking in she overhears something, and then tries to get the info out of him while they’re sparring. His continued avoidance will only heighten her curiosity, giving you a great opportunity to get…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@Alia *nods* Yeah, I’ve read that, it was pretty good. XD
@That_writer_girl_99 But deep down inside, aren’t we all just a little afraid of Kate’s dragon breathe?
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*rushes in late* Story? What story? OH, that story. Ahem. Yes. Here you go. @Daeus @That_writer_girl_99 And I’ll tag @Kate-Flournoy just in case.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 okay. That’s fine. It’s good to know your limits. We don’t want you burning out. 😉
Wellll… since you want to stick to Kara’s pov, maybe she could overhear some guards talking about what happened? Or perhaps she hears Matthias talking to a guard, receiving or giving a message from/to the Warden. This gives her suspicions…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 again, my apologies… *clears throat meekly* Telepathic dragon in the making here; I was practicing and got it wrong. *mysterious wink*
Moving on now.
No, you’re right. That’s not enough to drive an entire chapter. Unless something important happens in the sparring room, I would say cut it entirely. Writing is about change,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Oops. I’ve already left.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My apologies. That’s what would have gotten me stuck. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 switch POVs.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll give him a shot. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin @jess @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jane-maree Anyone with me tonight?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@Daeus shhhhh! Don’t scare the newbies!
Ah well… guess it’s too late for that. *sighs**blinks scaled eyelids happily* Yes indeed @That_Writer_Girl_99… did I fail to mention? I’m a dragon. *accidentally ignites her mug of tabasco sauce with laughing*
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