Elizabeth

Oh, good. *sighs in relief* The Wiser isn’t dead. Thank you, @catwing! Or should I thank Kay? Or even the Wiser himself, for simply acting?

Anyway, this was great! As usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.

@seekjustice Unfortunately I’m editing, so no Word War.
@jesspenrose Yes I’m curing all those zombies you pointed out. Thanks again. 🙂

@seekjustice It has. 🙂
@jesspenrose welcome! I’m finally going through those notes you left me. XP
@rochellaine *laughs* Oh that’s hard.

@seekjustice I’m editing Finding Secrets. 😛

@ariel-ashira Oh, double neatness!

@filewriterbase13x YAY! If you need more details tell me. 😀

Unfortunately my character has stolen my next part. Thanks Kay.

Part Six
In Deep Waters (Hello, reader people :P)

/I could’ve done better./ I stared at the old bearded man lying motionless on the ground. His friends watched where the Catwing and narrator had vanished. /The doctor was a nice touch. But this death is too dull and failable./ A…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira That sounds like him. 🙂
I just noticed our profile pictures are looking the same way. Neat? Not neat? 😀

@ariel-ashira Perhapss I can make sense of half asleep writings because I have experience writing them. 😛
Will you look at that you signature finally loaded. XD

@ariel-ashira *nods* Indeed.
I think it makes sense. 🙂

@filewriterbase13x The turtles. I love it! XD I second want @supermonkey42 said.
What happened to beautiful raspberry sun?! 0.0

@catwing and @valtmy  Thank you both!

@ariel-ashira Aaaah, I see.
I’m scared. *cocks head*

*shrugs* We know you didn’t mean it. They’re nice poems.
Look, in life you’re bound to offend people. Even if you try not to. You make up, you learn. Sometimes afterward you learn more about each other.
And you don’t know what offends people until you (or someone else) offends them (or they…[Read more]

@seekjustice Yay! That’s good.
@alia Praying.
@ingridrd Congratulations! Praying for both those. 🙂 🙁

@ariel-ashira *looks down at ‘pale’ feathers* What fear am I confirming? That cats do rule the world? That having wings is really cool? That my feathers have gone pale?! *hiss of horror*
*blinks yellow eyes innocently*
I like most of my poem. 🙂

@daeus I don’t have time to read it all now. But I read a good chunk, and it was helpful already.
Thanks.
Turtles scare away foxes? I thought sitting in a box with a pair of socks eating green eggs and ham did that… Or does that only work for people named Sam?

@filewriterbase13x Do you wish to include me? *grins* That would be lovely.
I like your beginning. 😀

@ariel-ashira *looks down at ‘pale’ feathers* What fear am I confirming? That cats do rule the world? That having wings is really cool? That my feathers have gone pale?! *hiss of horror*
*blinks yellow eyes innocently* I like most of my poem. 🙂