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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series. 🙂 And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave. (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…) Talk to you later!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂
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Emma Flournoy's profile was updated 6 years, 9 months ago
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Christi-Eaton *pops in and says hello* Unfortunately no suggestions, though… Other than the classics of Calvin and Hobbes and Peanuts.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Tell me of your comics, Elizabeth 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 9 months ago
@epicaddie2 Yep, I think I figured it out now! Thanks muchly. 🙂
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Daeus posted an update 6 years, 9 months ago
Hi @dekreel,
🙂
You’re probably still on hiatus, but I’ve seen the new recruits you’ve sent in and I wanted to send you some notes that will hopefully be helpful.
If you’re still looking to flex your ambassador muscles, I came up with a list of things you can brainstorm to see what new audiences you can still reach. Once you’ve made a list, I…[Read more]
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Ingrid started the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 9 months ago
Okay, guys. I got brave and decided to share the prologue from the first draft of my fantasy novel, Substitute. Since it’s obviously the opening of the book, I want to know if you guys would keep reading. And please add grammar mistakes/rewording edits. I love your advice!!! 🙂
Here goes noth…[Read more]
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine yeah, my dad is tired of me changing the scenes. Me too. XP bye!
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Catwing posted an update 6 years, 9 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @jess-penrose @daughteroftheking
I’ve been thinking about changing the VR scene in the first two chapters. Perhaps to just a ‘playdate’ with them sword fighting (because I want to have sword knowledge before they go on their quest), obstacle course, or something like that.
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I think that would be good. As long as it is clear what is going on, and maybe provides some insight into the characters personalities during the scenes, which would make it doubly useful.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@ariel-ashira oooohh…
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@jess-penrose No, you haven’t told me about passive voice yet. 🙂
@seekjustice That’s good to know I’m not alone. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.
@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.
@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@christi-Eaton There’s a manga series, Manga Classics that adapts classics into graphic novels. I’ve only read the Jungle Book and Les Miserables adaptions. They were pretty good.
Some of Ted Dekker’s books have been adapted into graphic novels.
There’s also comic collections like, Calvin and Hobbes, Peanuts, etc.
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Catwing replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
Now I just have to finish everyone else.
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