@tabitha-cassandra
Active 5 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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ella replied to the topic Fantasy Chapter Critique Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
Wow!!!!! 😃 @gracie-j phrased it perfectly!!! Don’t be shy to share at all–your style and the chapter itself is SO good!!!! ❤ The pacing and mystery and dialogue was all crafted incredibly well!!! Great job, keep sharing more please!!!!!
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ella replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
Heyo, and welcome to the Kingdom!!!! 😃 How’s it going? I’m Ella and it’s SO awesome to have you here!!!
A couple of things about me:
1)Â I LOVE smoothies ❤
2)Â I play basketball at my small Christian private school 🏀 and I’m also super in to running 🏃♀️
3)Â I adore Christian hip-hop, some Christian contemporary stuff (Jer…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Ooh! I should start making these again, haha.
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Lin replied to the topic Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Ahahah my first story was a fanfic…I think that fanfic is great for beginning writers because all the characters are already there, you can just practice plot and other things. I had ideas for fics too, ahhh, but then I started writing OG stuff…
ngl I do find fanfics a bit cringe tho but if you write no judgement because…[Read more] -
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Fantasy Chapter Critique Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
@writerlexi1216 I would be honored for you to read it!!! Thank you so much for being willing to do so 😀 (And please, don’t feel rushed. It’s not like I’m on a deadline or anything, lol :P)
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Elizabeth started the topic Fantasy Chapter Critique Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
Hello friends!
I come to you today with a critique request for the first chapter of my WIP (which can be read here). This particular excerpt has been giving me trouble for a while now, so I’d love to hear an outside source’s thoughts on it.
Also, I haven’t really shared my writing with anyone besides my husband for the better part of three years…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic A Poll Just for Fun in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I took the poll a few days ago, I just forgot to post. Sorry about that, but it was really cool.
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
So just to let you know, I re-read these posts and you just gave me an absolutely fabulous idea for my characters that I never thought of before *rubs hands together with a mischievous laugh that my poor characters can’t hear*. Thanks so much!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
That is all so so true. In fact, as I read your post, my mind came up with two anger and several great mistake and necessity kisses that were as you said, contingent or more of a beginning than an end. For me, I guess it all depends on the couple.
What I meant was more of the ‘declaration’ type kiss being the climax-to-end (since one of…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
XD So relatable X)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago

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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I just read @gracie-j ‘s post and agree completely with point 1#
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Ah, so true, so true. It is extremely excruciating when an author drags out the something/nothingness forever and untactfully. Especially under the “just friends” excuse.
A good romance is so hard to balance and it’s just as hard to drag out as it is to not drag out.
My favorite romances are usually in stand-alone books because the…[Read more] -
ella replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago

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ella replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago

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ella replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago

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Lin replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@nova21 Haha no I cringe really hard when I think about it…I let my characters take the wheel, tbh.
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ella replied to the topic Writing A Series in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Good advice! You don’t seem like the most romance-y type, lol!!! 😂 Good point about subplots 👍
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