Sunny421

@freed_and_redeemed

Okay, I’m back to finish going through your scene.

What are your thoughts on Aaron/Joash? Do you feel bad for them at all, or do they just seem like villains?

I understand them and what they are doing. While they don’t seem like total villains to me (I see them in both a realistic and historical context), I hate what they are…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Hi! I didn’t read through all your questions yet since I don’t have much time right now. I’ll try to come back and answer them. =)

Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun&#…

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@godlyfantasy12

This is tragic.

@keilah-h

Aww, thank you! I’m learning.

You guessed correctly! It’s Smalls as a youngling. I changed my profile pic in honor of Green Ember’s birthday back in December, but forgot to change it back. And now I like it. XD

Yes, they are wonderful books! It was actually Green Ember that made me want to write whole stories instead of random stuff…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Aww, thanks! They were a lot of fun.

You guessed correctly. 😉 It’s a drawing I did of Jupiter Smalls as a youngling. (He might be my favorite character.) I swapped my profile pic in honor of Green Ember‘s birthday back in December, but forgot to change it back.

@koshka @freed-and-redeemed @godlyfantasy12

I am so excited. XD I made working covers for all three volumes of Heirs of Ashes. And found a really bad quality image of my current reference illustration for Viktor and Alyona.

My first one had reeaaalllyyy small ears….

Now I should actually try to write that first volume….

Here’s a t…[Read more]

… @thosewhohavesharedartonhere …

Ah, I love looking at y’all’s stuff! It’s fascinating to see everyone’s different styles, and helps get me inspired to do art again. 🙂

@freed_and_redeemed

They were…twins. I forgot…

Oh.

How could you?

@freed_and_redeemed

Pastor Nikolai Aleksandr Smirnov and MGB Agent Peter Dimitri Kuznetsov together as the MCs of a novel would be fabulous…I’m getting ideas already…oh no XXD

What?! Another book? Oh dear. XD

A quick side note: did you intend Alesandr and Dimitri to be middle names or were you referring to patronymics (the father’s (or other…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

His own book? Welp, that is the way it goes, isn’t it. XD

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

Soviet Russia era Bible smugglers/underground churches?! EEEEEEEE…I am so happy.

Also, I adore the name Nikolai.

SD Smith quotes…

“Call me Master, child.”

“Yes Masterchild.”

“I’d go for Joe’s arm. He’s sensitive there and has to get it wrapped by the pretty doctors every day.”

“Hey!” Joe said “They make me. It’s not like I want to.”

“Semi-madness?” Emma laughed. “So he’s ahead of you on the madness scale. That’s good.”

“I waked up this…[Read more]

I apologize…aren’t breaking hearts what all writers are best at??? 💕😭😆

What?!! Of course not!!!!!! *Smirk*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooof. It’s so hard to pick a favorite character. XD Especially when I haven’t actually read the book book yet.

As you know, I do like Leon. He was my first favorite, when I first met them. He also reminds me of other characters I have long adored (Natan Israeli, Judah Ben-Hur). At times I don’t enjoy his arc very much,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Heart melts*

That was so sweet! I love how you tied it all together, and Isabel is adorable.

Who is this Lina? She sounds so sweet and soo much more than a cripple.

Franz…you ignoramus. I’m about to use my store of archaic insults on you.

*Storms off in a huff*

@loopylin

*Pokes head out from secret vantage point*

Hey, I love long RPs. Please don’t apologize. I’d like to see more.

How else are y’all supposed to practice writing and me spying?

*Disappears into the shadows*

@elishavet-pidyon

The tea…XD That should soooo happen.

What if Isabel makes him tea and it tastes awful, but he drinks it anyway so she doesn’t feel bad?

@freed_and_redeemed

A happy/sweet Leon scene!!!!! I’ve been wanting to see some healthy scenes with him and his kids sooo badly! It’s such a sweet family and he loves them so much it hurts to read the not do happy scenes. XD

Ok, so thoughts….

Maybe forget for a moment the spoiler and write as if everything is normal. You can add implications…[Read more]

What if he puts a flower in her hair? What if one of the boys finds a snail or frog and wants to take it home?