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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ahhhhh, hummus. Not whatever else that typo was. XD specifically the kind with olives.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ah…
First off, I MUST HAVE WATER! All my family knows this, and my friends probably do to. Without water, I get headaches and become lethargic. Yeah.
As for food, I like to snack on Humis and pita chips (or any cracker I can find. Just not graham crackers. That is not a good mix.) I also like nuts, specifically almonds, pistachios,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
By the way, I don’t know if either of y’all know this, but if you want to see if someone is on or not you can go to the community page and scroll all the way to the bottom. It isn’t always quite accurate, but it is a way to check. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AWWWW!!! *Sobs*
Zlatan
“I…I forgive you.” Paxton looked up at him, his eyes filling with tears before he buried his head in Zlatan’s stomach.
I forgive you.
Zlatan gently lifted the boy in his arms, spreading instant fire across his shoulders. Those wounds had been for children, and somehow, he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Exactly! Only for me it’s more like Mama coming over to me and asking if I’m okay, because I’ve just been staring off at nothing with a very serious expression on my face. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, Zlatan is gold, Vulkasin greeny-yellow.
Zlatan
Soft arms wrapped around him, pulling him back from the black cell. He opened his eyes to see Paxton looking up at him. He swallowed.
But what was the little lad saying? That everything would be fine, that he shouldn’t be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Zlatan was…weeping?! The group stopped.
His brother hardly ever showed much emotion, or at least not like most people. And he would never cry.
Vulk started to reach for his brother’s shoulder, then quickly recoiled remembering just in time. He but his lip, at a total loss…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AGH! *Gasp* You did it alright.
Paxton, you’re so sweet…Please don’t get scared about what’s about to happen.
Zlatan
No. Oh no.
The little boy was looking up at him with those blue blue eyes. “A-Are y-you h-hurt…?”
You can’t lie to a child.
A child.
Just childre…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Btw y’all, at this point in Zlatan’s story children are likely to shake him up. A lot. I sort of forgot that a minute ago, but we may have a major break down ahead.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
AMICAI!!!!!! *Sob*
Those poor hands too… I’m probably going to cry over your books whenever they get published. And I practically never cry over books.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Awww, Riker…
Viktor
He bent his knees and slowly knelt on the stone, careful not to lose his balance. He was still getting used to carrying Esen’s weight.
Among other burdens….
There, now Lily could reach the bird. Esen chortled as Reúven guided Lily’s little hand across her…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ooooo…I have no idea. I usually come up with my story stuff either randomly staring off at nothing, or trying to do something I should definitely focus on but don’t really want to. But that wasn’t the question, although it may explain my answer.
I usually write whenever I am suddenly attacked by an overloading creative brain, so… I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
The young man beside him–Reuben was it?–smiled, his eyes suddenly turning concerned.
“Are you…are you alright?”
Absolutely perfect, thank you.
The bindings on his back had loosened a bit, and he’d obviously reopened several gashes.
But that wasn’t to the purpose. It wasn’…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ok! Take some pictures of squirrels for me! 😉
(To explain. Last time we were at the zoo, we spent an inordinate amount of time watching squirrels steal food from exhibits. XD Then we were like: how was our favorite part the squirrels? We did not come to see the squirrels!)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
“Do you know anywhere we can go?”
The group suddenly turned to him, waiting. Zlatan frowned and sucked in as full a breath he could manage. Then lay full length on the floor, ear pressed to the ground, eyes closing.
Distant footsteps. A slight vibration below them, pro…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Oh, Lily… XD I’d want to do the same, though.
Viktor
“Viktor!” The tiny lass looked up at him, pleading with her large, sweet eyes. “Can I pet her?”
Riker started, obviously not comfortable with it. Neither was Leon, if expressions said anything. Esen was a prey bird, after all, and of a dau…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ugh! Oh! That…Corvina!! And November!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
He stopped a few paces behind Grimm. How horribly exposed he felt without a Volk’s regular armor.
The group before him had been standing ready to fight, but this little boy’s reaction seemed to have frozen them in place. Snow…
Zlatan quietly sheathed his blade, breath…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@koshka @freeddomwriter @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h
Viktor
Riker had walked to the doorway, but Viktor couldn’t tell much of their conversation. At least, he didn’t care to, not right now. His neck was craned and his eyes glued to a spot of dark feathers in the sky above.
Was it…?
Suddenly, a prey bird’s cry fell down to them: the cry of a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I am!
[Zlatan’s picked up a bit of medical knowledge from the camps if Leo still needs it, although it is medieval battle medicine. Nothing weird or stupid like leeches, bloodletting, and nightshade (seriously, medieval doctors needed some common sense), just not our level of efficiency.]
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