Sunny421

Oops, poor fellow. I’d better hunt him down.

@godlyfantasy12

Ahh, gotcha. I just was suddenly wondering, “where are my characters again?” XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, and is Inglor still with Luna?

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, that will make more sense for her arc…and be even more wonderfully confusing for characters. XD

I think Elishavet set it up so you could show up whenever. =)

Wow. Look what happens when I step off for a day. These were really fun to read through!

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Eira is an Alve, although she has Forester blood too. Without an idea of who she is, she has been raised in an orphanage that doesn’t believe the Light exists, and that the Alven are mere fairy tales. She is taught first of all the Light, t…

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Winton

He set a box of plastic cutlery beside the space where the pizza would go. The fruit and vegetable tray was in the little fridge in the corner of his office. Everything was basically ready.

Chairs for the club members were set around a long table in the center of the room. The…[Read more]

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@freedomwriter76

Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)

So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.

@freedomwriter76

That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…

I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD

But the one to one conversations are priceless!

Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂

@freedomwriter76

Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!

And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.

The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

With November? No! At least, not my guys. They’re fair enough to not expect everyone else to be completely open when they aren’t.

They will be curious, however, and curiosity mean they will try to find out more.

By the way, is Corvina still in the shadows?

@godlyfantasy12

I KNOOWWW! 😭 but poor November is in serious trouble!

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By the way, Reúven’s “usual” is a quick, anonymous strike to a nervous shut down point. I thought it might give a decent way to clear off Hitchens for the moment, especially since I can’t see either of my boys, or any of the others in this group, standing still right then. XD

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Viktor

The slug, Hitchens had his blade to Arabella’s throat. Viktor exchanged a wide-eyed glance with Reúven and unlooped his rod from his belt. Reúven had drawn his knife, and was quickly moving behind the man, his eyes glittering.

Then it happened. A wave of terror ripped t…[Read more]

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I’m on. I’m actually stuck home sick right now, so I’ll be off and on.

I am considering Eira coming, not because she’s been technically abused,  but to get some really sad ideas out of her head. For instance, she’s been raised to be agnostic.

Eira

A slight smile flickers across my face when s…[Read more]

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Eira

I stare at her for a long moment untill the mild shock wears off and my eyes drop back to the half eaten jello cup. “Astronomy.”

Stars. My hand itches to find the book in my backpack and loose myself among them, but I swallow the last glob and ask what a brother’s like. If she’s talking I don’t have to, and besides; I sort…[Read more]

They better let Paxton go, even if it’s like “well, at least it’ll keep him out of our way” although it is usually them in his way but……..

@freedomwriter76

Yay! I’m totally fine with it.

Eira

I force the last of my broccoli down with a gulp of water. The bread isn’t that bad, infact I almost enjoy the grainy texture of the garlic topping.

“Hi.” My drink almost topples at the sudden approach. The girl smiles at me and waves. “I’m Aadelheide.”

She sets her lunch sack on the table…[Read more]

Who should I tag for Eira? Just everyone?

Eira

I slide into the end of the lunch line careful not to attract any attention, even though Aramis appeared to already be occupied. Still, I hadn’t gained notice yet today and certainly didn’t want to start now.

Most of the kids around me pretend I don’t exist, probably because they don’t know what to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you for the happy chapters though! I’d like to see more like that please.

@godlyfantasy12

Ahhhhhh!!!!! She’s hilariously awesome.