Sunny421

@grcr

Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write medieval fantasy too, as well as the random poem, flash fiction, and well, randomness.

So how fantastic is your book world? I have two main WIPs which are neither of them magical – although one does have some fantastic elements like fire captured in…[Read more]

@grcr

Why hello there and welcome to the Kingdom! I’m called Koshka around here. I’m a middle-grade animal fantasy writer with random spurts into a bunch of other genres, who also dabbles in poetry and ice cream. A lot of ice cream.

Now for the ASK-THE-NEWBIE-QUESTIONS!!

1. What’s your favorite author’s natural hair color?
2. If you could own a…

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Oh btw, to anyone who is interested I am thinking about starting a RP for animal characters. I have the forum typed up, just not submitted. If there’s enough interest to start it going I will. =)

@freedomwriter76

Thanks for the notes, it helps.

But as for your excerpt, WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO THE BABY?

I mean, I guess he assumes silence and thus saves the lives of those he can. Or at least I hope he is able to because something tells me the guilt associated with “betraying” someone else would be the worst kind of torment to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

GAHHHH! *Pounds table*

ThIs! THIS is why I both read and write Middle Grade.

*Table falls apart*

And Hans?

Be glad I can’t get to you through this screen.

*Storms out slamming door*

@freedomwriter76

Narnia? O.O My native land!!!

Peter and Lucy were always my favorites, but I love all the Pevensie siblings. And a whole bunch of other characters like Caspian the Tenth, Puddleglum, Aravis, Shasta, Rilian, Glimfeather, Reepicheep, Digory, Emeth, Jewel, Trumpkin…..(is it really possible to name them all?)

Nevertheless, my…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hmm, interesting. It makes sense. There are many ways and categories for character development and arcs, which is a good thin as there are many Authors as well.

I think with people saying their characters are both Passive/Active they are actually referring to a character being Active in the A Story and Passive in the B Story. I have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Blinks*

That would be…utterly terrifying.

And I don’t even know that much about Marvel, but…

*Imagining the chaos*

*Grins*

@freedomwriter76

What’s your crossover? I don’t recognize most of the people, but I haven’t watched many movies so that’s not a surprise.

Wait, is it a Narnia fanfic? 0.0

CoN is one of my absolute all time favorite books series!!!! My siblings and I grew up listening to the Focus on the Family dramatized audio of the Chronicles, which are still…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YES. I. AM.

But only for his own protection, so it’s a good thing, right? Of course right.

@freedomwriter76

Thank You!!! It’s an experiment. 😉

Is there anything you liked/thoughts/suggestions?

And yes, I think she is turning to kidnapping. XD

@koshka

Awww, thank you! For reading! My crazy opening! And liking it!

I’m glad you think so. Although I think there are some snotty Alwin chapters ahead. *Wry laugh*

Yes of course. That dreaded next chapter. Don’t worry, it will get worse. 😁😅

@hybridlore

Thank you! That means so much. I’m still trying to figure out my writing voice – or at…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

AHHHH, beautiful! Symbolic! Lovely! Suspenseful!

Alwin and William are so heartachally adorable. (Especially with you know what in the first chapter. *Glares at evil guard* *quietly stuffs Alwin in secret closet*)

@highscribeofaetherium (your were)

Thanks!! This is my second (third?) Try at the opening.

@koshka @sunny421 @freedomwriter @godlyfanrasy @joycalle …iforgotyourtag @Idon’tknowwhototag

Hi everyone! I know I’ve been floating about in shadowy silence, so I’m sorry if I haven’t commented on some of y’all’s excellent work. Maybe I’ll be able to go back and give some thoughts as I’ve really enjoyed reading them.

Anyway, now that long and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love the idea that “bad magic” is essentially rebellion against the Light, manipulating what was originally made to be a beautiful thing into a dark and twisted thing. It’s very good. If you’ve ever read Jack Zulu and the Waylander’s Key, you will have read one of my recent favorite books that addresses this in it’s themes. At…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wow.

I love underground church stories, and that was with your beloved characters! A little quick of a turning, but still,

Wow.

I like this Peter. Thank you for sharing!

@godlyfantasy12

I’d love to tag along and see what they are, whether is a new forum or reusing an old one.

@godlyfantasy12

That’s perfect for Lyn.

And of course I love a good sibling relationship, especially TWINS!!

So, are either of the girl’s mother’s alive? (And if not…how did they die? [If you can say])

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH!!! Питер!!!

(Although, is this room being recorded, like is it bugged? =|)