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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Not exactly. Can we assume my characters get to the top of the window with little incident, and pick as Mikkel steps through the window?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
They’re adorable!
Btw, I may wish to drop another character in here soon, but not till the group kind of shrinks a bit. She’s actually from a novel I haven’t talked a lot about, as it’s not my main WIP. Anyway, all the lovely pics brought her back to mind.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
“Well then chaps, youngest to oldest.” The man…eighteen year-old… Mikkel bowed to him. “Viktor.”
Viktor nodded and looked up at the window. Why did he suddenly feel nervous? He’d done this – loved doing this.
He closed his eyes with a sigh and leaned his head against the stone, lis…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Yes, please do!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Yayyy!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I can!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ah well…*sniffle*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I’m on. =)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ah! Fantasy.
First off, those characters and story sound fascinating.
(Is Josephine’s hair really like it is in the picture? Because if so… It’s beautiful!! So thick and wavy and warm copper-brown. And although it could be longer, it’s a good length.) [I’ve totally never made a character starting from her hair. Never. ;)…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I actually can’t think of anything in particular to put, that may be helpful, as I don’t know what you want advice on. But if you have a question, now or later, feel free to ask!
And I’ll probably fill an entire page with my rambles.
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Oops. I didn’t intend to tag everyone. I have tag lists saved on my copy/paste thing, which normally works out fine, except when I hit the wrong one.
Like just now.
Oh well.
Ah, well I’m an identical, so writing a fraternal set has been an adventure.
(Wow, I’m not sure of my favorite, but…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yeah, it can be difficult. I’m steering clear myself.
OH the TWINS! I almost forgot.
Have you ever written twins before?
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Good! That does make a big difference in the layout.
Exactly. I’ve seen it used well (Narnia, Wingfeather) and I’ve seen it otherwise (let’s not go there). It’s a tool in writing that needs a lot of control, if that makes sense.
What I call True Fantasy; not exactly an allegory, but still a parable of sorts. A tale of truth…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Alsooooo…hehe…
Interesting pictures…
(Also, do you know the Russian is the top left corner on the first picture means On the Edge? It’s making me wonder what that means.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to this side of the Kingdom! *Hands you a slice of cream pie*
Ooo, True Fantasy! (Or at least that’s what I call it)
It sounds good. Is it still a romance, or is that now a subplot? Is there magic in this world?
Also, do you need any help with anything?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Novembré nearly fell, but was snatched through the window instead.
Thank the Maker.
Zlatan glanced around the group. Vulk was bouncing on the balls of his feet.
He sighed. “Go on.”
Vulkasin flashed up and in, ignoring the rope. Which was probably a good thing…
“Now,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
And um… who’s going next?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
*gasp*
AAGHHH!!!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
So… I’m working on the important ages in Eirtan. This is a mix between medieval and ancient societies, so it gets interesting.
For boys:
14 is of course, the age of accountability/adulthood. (Like a Bar Mitzvah, only different) 21 is the age when one is considered grown up – a man. (It’s also kinda traditional age to get…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Seven up, five to to go.
Oh, and himself. That made six.
For a moment no one moved toward the rope, each waiting for another.
“Ara, November?” Mikkel smiled at them, “your turn?”
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