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				<title>Linus Smallprint started the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost - Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Jan 2026 20:09:55 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p><em>In the world of Ehverwyld, magic is an evil thing. It twists those who use into horrible crow-like monsters. Alan knows this. It took his family and has left its mark on him. Alan deeply regrets the day he used it.</em></p>
<p><em>But it isn’t the end for Alan yet. He’s determined to put his past behind him, by joining his country’s army. He will prove to the w&hellip;</em></p></blockquote>
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				<title>whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jan 2026 01:05:38 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay I don’t want to post any scenes yet but I technically drafted those words, Ruth and Loops! So I’m officially stocked with snowballs.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a></p>
<p>You asked for it!! x5 &#x2744;&#xfe0f;</p>
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				<title>The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2026 23:29:29 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wrote my words, finally!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a></p>
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				<title>Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/art-sharing-for-all/page/254/#post-209574</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 05 Jan 2026 00:48:53 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a></p>
<p>Thank you! &#x1fa77;</p>
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				<title>Liberty started the topic Jesus Writing Month!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 04 Nov 2025 13:43:14 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freed_and_redeemed/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freed_and_redeemed</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/linus-smallprint/' rel="nofollow ugc">@linus-smallprint</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/euodia-vision/' rel="nofollow ugc">@euodia-vision</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/savannah_grace2009/' rel="nofollow ugc">@savannah_grace2009</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hybridlore/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hybridlore</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/janellebelovedpig/' rel="nofollow ugc">@janellebelovedpig</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a>, <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/raxforge/' rel="nofollow ugc">@raxforge</a>, <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a>, <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a>, <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a></p>
<p>Are any of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-205362"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/jesus-writing-month/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Sep 2025 12:12:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/linus-smallprint/' rel="nofollow ugc">@linus-smallprint</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hybridlore/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hybridlore</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/raxforge/' rel="nofollow ugc">@raxforge</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arcticanimals/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arcticanimals</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jonas/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jonas</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/savannah_grace2009/' rel="nofollow ugc">@savannah_grace2009</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freed_and_redeemed/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freed_and_redeemed</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/thearcaneaxiom/' rel="nofollow ugc">@thearcaneaxiom</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a></p>
<p>Hello everyone!</p>
<p>You may or may not have heard me rave about the MARKED series. It&#8217;s a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-204856"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/554/#post-206780" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-sister-published-a-book/#post-205641</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2025 16:52:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a></p>
<p>Did any of you get around to reading her first book?</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-sister-published-a-book/#post-205639</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2025 16:48:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a></p>
<p>My sister, Ellie, just published the sequel to <em>A Prached Land. </em>She would appreciate it if you would check it out!</p>
<p><a href="https://www.amazon.ca/gp/product/B0FNCLH3L6?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tpbk_1&amp;storeType=ebooks" rel="noopener" rel="nofollow ugc">Difficult Decisions in Difficult Days by Elizabeth Russell</a></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-sister-published-a-book/#post-205636</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2025 16:36:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a></p>
<p>My sister, Ellie, has published the sequel to A Parched Land. You can now order it on Amazon. She would appreciate it if you would take a look!</p>
<p><a href="https://www.amazon.ca/gp/product/B0FNCLH3L6?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tpbk_1&amp;storeType=ebooks" rel="nofollow ugc">Difficult Decisions in Difficult Days by Elizabeth Russell</a></p>
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				<title>Koshka replied to the topic I&#039;m not an International Lawyer: Help in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-an-international-lawyer-help/#post-205251</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Aug 2025 17:13:22 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, thanks though. Neither do I.</p>
<p>*Uncertain laughter*</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a></p>
<p>Hmmm, not a bad idea. I&#8217;ll look into that.</p>
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<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a></p>
<p>Alrighty. =)</p>
<p>Also not certain exactly how an ongoing murder investigation would pan out/effect things, when there&#8217;s no clear suspect or solid evidence besides the dad&#8217;s work (Parents were&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-204441"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-an-international-lawyer-help/#post-205251" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic I&#039;m not an International Lawyer: Help in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-an-international-lawyer-help/#post-205228</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 19 Aug 2025 21:01:25 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sorry, I have no idea. I would have to ask a lawyer.</p>
<p>Maybe the other Canadian knows?</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint posted an update: @ellette-giselle @keliah-h @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper [&#133;]</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/203998/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Jul 2025 18:54:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> @keliah-h <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hybridlore/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hybridlore</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a></p>
<p>Hello everyone! I&#8217;m back!</p>
<p>An update regarding my writing. I was reflecting on the things I write. My goal in my writing is first and foremost to glorify God. But I&#8217;ve realized I have let the fantasy side of my writing become an idol to me. I admit I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-203998"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/203998/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>whaley replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2025 13:50:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tagging as many people as I can think of.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/linus-smallprint/' rel="nofollow ugc">@linus-smallprint</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rae</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/raxforge/' rel="nofollow ugc">@raxforge</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/janellebelovedpig/' rel="nofollow ugc">@janellebelovedpig</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/thearcaneaxiom/' rel="nofollow ugc">@thearcaneaxiom</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/princesachronicle22/' rel="nofollow ugc">@princesachronicle22</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hybridlore/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hybridlore</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/savannah_grace2009/' rel="nofollow ugc">@savannah_grace2009</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/the_lost-journal/' rel="nofollow ugc">@the_lost-journal</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a>&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-203778"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-great-kp-search/#post-204613" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint posted an update: @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper [&#133;]</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/203435/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2025 20:07:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hybridlore/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hybridlore</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a></p>
<p>Hey everyone! I&#8217;m just letting you all know, I&#8217;m going to be taking a break from Kingdom Pen. I&#8217;ve been spending a lot of time on my laptop for a while and I think I need to unplug a bit for my mental and spiritual health and go do something outside.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-203435"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/203435/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2025 20:02:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Time to take this back to art</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a></p>
<p>Updated artwork of Cryus! This still needs to be cleaned up, and I may add in a bit of a background, but here it is right now:</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jun 2025 15:50:52 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here is a link to some feedback questions I would appreciate if you could take the time to answer  for TNPT II:<br />
<a href="https://1drv.ms/w/c/bcdce8f567320b25/EUdOl0zXXS1FqxjfB_EjEa8BOYllMgK1V_gsIDd0dOXugw?e=iU7bHt" rel="noopener" rel="nofollow ugc">The Sword Feedback &#8211; 1st Draft (In Microsoft Word)</a></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jun 2025 20:50:33 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sorry for the wait. But Chapter the 42nd is out!</p>
<p>And this concludes <em>The Narrow Path Trilogy &#8211; Book II: The Sword</em>! Thank you for reading! I&#8217;ll get some feedback questions ready soon!</p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jun 2025 18:13:26 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 41st out!</p>
<p>Only one or two more chapters after this.</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jun 2025 17:43:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 40th out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jun 2025 19:28:52 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 39th out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 13 Jun 2025 17:25:09 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 38th!</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2025 21:58:56 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 37th out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jun 2025 17:46:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 36th out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jun 2025 17:59:43 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 35th out!</p>
<p>At more chapters than the last book now. But not more words so far.</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 04 Jun 2025 19:51:45 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 34th out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jun 2025 20:09:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 33 out!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jun 2025 16:41:03 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister&#8217;s book?</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jun 2025 16:38:44 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 32 out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 31 May 2025 17:34:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter the 31st out!</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 30 May 2025 20:42:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello everyone! I had an idea for a different project than intrigued me enough that I felt the need write it down. This doesn&#8217;t happen very often to me. In fact, I think the series I am currently writing, The Narrow Path Trilogy, it the only other idea I have had. So I had to put working on TNPT Book II aside this week and jot down this scene and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-202731"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/last-of-the-righteous/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 24 May 2025 18:21:06 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I tend to lean towards global flood as well. That&#8217;s something I hadn&#8217;t considered regarding rock layers.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a></p>
<p>My dad says that there are a lot of generations skipped in those genealogies, and that they only recorded the more important people, so that&#8217;s why he doesn&#8217;t think that they are a very accurate way to calculate the age of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-202499"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/denomination-q-and-a/page/28/#post-203410" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 24 May 2025 00:43:33 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-202455"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/denomination-q-and-a/page/27/#post-203368" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2025 15:40:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 30 out!</p>
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				<title>hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2025 01:54:04 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>If there’s enough interest, we could try to plan one for late May/early June.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/savannah_grace2009/' rel="nofollow ugc">@savannah_grace2009</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a></p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kyronthearcanin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kyronthearcanin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/highscribeofaetherium/' rel="nofollow ugc">@highscribeofaetherium</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trailblazer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trailblazer</a> @anyone-i-forgot</p>
<p>Is anyone up for a call sometime soon? We could try for the 2&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-202306"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/kp-google-meet/page/22/#post-203222" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 20 May 2025 19:57:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 29!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-203013</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 May 2025 21:03:11 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 28 out!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202693</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2025 16:27:27 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 27 out!</p>
<p>This chapter took an unexpected direction. I never thought I would be writing that sort of thing. *shivers* But then again, Andrew Perterson had something like it in his first Wingfeather book.</p>
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				<title>whaley replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2025 02:05:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I&#8217;d like to know who wants to join!</p>
<p>Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freed_and_redeemed/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freed_and_redeemed</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/linus-smallprint/' rel="nofollow ugc">@linus-smallprint</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/euodia-vision/' rel="nofollow ugc">@euodia-vision</a> (did I get that tag&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-201730"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-else-doing-crazy-editing-week/#post-202659" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202589</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 08 May 2025 20:26:37 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 26 out!</p>
<p>I feel like the quality of these recent chapters hasn&#8217;t been as good, and I&#8217;m loosing steam. But I need to remeber that this is just the first draft. Fell free to provide&#8230; motivation to get me to keep going until then end. (Interoperate that how you will. I know,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-201653"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202589" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202541</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 06 May 2025 22:00:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a></p>
<p>Chapter 25 out!</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think I want this to be James. This is too similar to Eric. Both characters feel unappreciated, and grow depressed because they don&#8217;t fit in and feel. The only thing different is James has hope in The Saviour so he&#8217;s less self centered and is more outgoing.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-201605"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202541" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202346</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 02 May 2025 20:56:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a></p>
<p>Chapter 24!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202241</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 30 Apr 2025 17:42:13 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 23!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202077</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2025 19:56:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a></p>
<p>Chapter 22 out!</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-202021</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2025 19:01:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a></p>
<p>Chapter 21 out! Not too happy with this one. I&#8217;ve discovered I don&#8217;t like to write fight scenes.</p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-ii-the-sword/page/7/#post-201838</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Apr 2025 17:22:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a></p>
<p>Chapter 20 out!</p>
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				<title>Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone want to take a survey for an essay I&#039;m writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-want-to-take-a-survey-for-an-essay-im-writing/#post-201830</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Apr 2025 14:19:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a>    <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/liberty/' rel="nofollow ugc">@liberty</a>  <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/linus-smallprint/' rel="nofollow ugc">@linus-smallprint</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/janellebelovedpig/' rel="nofollow ugc">@janellebelovedpig</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freed_and_redeemed/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freed_and_redeemed</a>    <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a>   <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/thearcaneaxiom/' rel="nofollow ugc">@thearcaneaxiom</a></p>
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<p>tagging a couple more people&#8230;.</p>
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				<title>hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/kp-google-meet/page/22/#post-201779</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2025 15:30:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theducktator/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theducktator</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/grcr/' rel="nofollow ugc">@grcr</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ellette-giselle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellette-giselle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/savannah_grace2009/' rel="nofollow ugc">@savannah_grace2009</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theshadow/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theshadow</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/stephie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@stephie</a> @anyone-else</p>
<p>Just a reminder that the group call will be tomorrow morning, Lord willing!</p>
<p>10:30 EST / 9:30 CST / 8:30 MST</p>
<p>(I think I got that right? I’m not really sure about the abbreviations. XD)</p>
<p>Please let m&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-200864"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/kp-google-meet/page/22/#post-201779" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Power replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2025 04:24:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I am one of them. &#x1f609;<br />
What if the name (singular) of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit was Jesus?<br />
What if the name of the Wonderful Counselor, Mighty God, Everlasting Father, and Prince of Peace was Jesus?<br />
What if the LORD JEHOVAH wasn&#8217;t just my strength and my song, but he also is become my Yeshua?<br />
What if there was only&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-200852"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/denomination-q-and-a/page/26/#post-201770" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy - Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 16 Apr 2025 21:36:55 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Chapter 19 out!</p>
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				<title>whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 16 Apr 2025 12:19:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We should totally bring this topic back. Tagging people who might not have seen this before&#8230; Go ahead and tag anyone else I forgot. My brain is a goldfish. XD</p>
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