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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
(The puns are driving me mad tho. You seriously need to stop or I’m going to lose it. lol)
Unless that’s your goal……….. lol
Eric right now:
Hmm… I think you might be getting a break from bad puns right now.
*violently defenestrates Eric*
*looks up what ‘defenestrate’ means* Oh!
Maybe Eric is just h…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
*violently defenestrates Eric*
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no Wikipedia page. XD
Yup, not there yet. Out of curiosity, what was your question(s)?
Also that’s too fun…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h
Could you please take your whole conversation about crushes on fictional characters elsewhere? Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
@stephie heh I’m the opposite. I can’t imagine what having a crush on a real person is like.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter! We are about two-thirds through The Cost now. (Maybe a little under.) This scene was not in the first draft, so I’m interested to see what you think of it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
WHAT!!! STEPHIE!!! TRAITOR!!
We are still pushing for Stripe to get hugged, and it is going to happen.
Its a fact.
and I just gave Linus a rundown on facts.
😉
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Here is some new artwork of Alan I’ve gradually been chipping away at when I have the chance over the last few weeks. I’ve been meaning to redo artwork of him with a more refined design for a while, I just have not been satisfied with most things I have drawn. Now I finally have something I’m happy with. I’m considering developing this further…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Let’s see…
@highscribeofaetherium @stephie @keilah-h @grcr @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @esther-c
Did I miss anyone?
- We need four more people to Break the Record
- Should we shoot for around 4 EST? That’s 3 o’clock Central, 2 o’clock Mountain, and 1 o’clock Pacific. we can push it to 5 EST,…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae YES! Tagging some people…
@whalekeeper @raxforge @esther-c @grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @beth-torres @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @elishavet-pidyon @allthekeepers
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
I was hoping to get this to you earlier, but I was having trouble writing the dialogue in this chapter for whatever reason. I’m still not quite happy with the first part or my title for this chapter, but let’s see what you all think.
Hopefully Chapter the 20th – The…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Yay!!! I think it fulfills two needs for us the readers if Stripe gets hugged. 1.) It’s super funny to see tough protective characters get hugged. 2.) I don’t know about anyone else, but I’m about ready to risk the claws to give him a hug myself. He needs it.
(Plus, he looks super soft and fluffy) 😛
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I did know Ellette was joking.
(The problem with these forum chats is it can be hard to portray emotion. Prehapes I should use more emojis or something.)
You’re so mean.
I don’t draw dogs, or anything in the dog family if I can help it. It never looks right. – Ellette
Sorry, can’t help you there XD
I suck…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know why, but this whole time I have really, really wanted one of the characters to give Stripe a hug. Like one of the little kids. It would be so cute, especially because he does not seem lie a hugs person, yet his protector side wouldn’t let him hurt a little kid. lol. – Ellette
Now that I’ve read ellett…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
I KNOW!
Linus, make some little kid hug Stripe, or we poor authors will be driven insane by the beautiful mental picture and lost opportunity that you sidestepped!! That one scene will make these books famous! If you leave it out, the books will slide into the shadows.
You have been warned.
lololol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
As predicted, I am still working on Chapter the 19th this week. In the mean time, I got some older artwork of Martha and Stripe to share with you. (I will do Stripe is a separate post). I will put these into my Google albums as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
Okay. I guess that would also help bring not just the characters, but the world to life.
I guess I do have Alan scratching his elbow whenever he feels the guilt of having used magic. I’ll have to think of some for other characters. I feel Tyn and Eric would have some.
I should probably pay more…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
The long-awaited Chapter the 18th is here. Give me a couple more weeks, and you will get to read Chapter the 19th!
By the way, does anyone have any advice on writing things happening during a conversation? I need more things than ‘character1 looked at/glanced at/stared…[Read more]
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