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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@theshadow @stephie @ellette-giselle @grcr
Thank you to you all, Ellie appreciates it!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@stephie @theshadow @rae @esther-c @the_lost-journal
Okay…I have an update about the Animal RP. So, I was trying to figure out how I was going to do this (I spent some time reading and studying the other RPs on here), and I decided to ask you all a question about how we should do this.
To clarify: there are two ways this could go.
1. I lead…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint started the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle, @highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @raxforge, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, @rae, @the_lost-journal, @savannah_grace2009 and anyone else who cares to look.
Hello everyone!
I wanted to let you all know my sister, Elizabeth, just has self-published a book on Amazon! (She has yet to create a Kingdom…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
How nice! Welcome, Winston!
Ooh! Newfoundland dogs are so huge and poofy! And they are incredibly strong!
Lewis and Clark actually had a Newfoundland dog named Seaman who went with them on their long trip. He proved to be a worthy companion to their journey.
Another cool thing about Newfoundland dogs is that their feet are…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
All right, ladies. Time to head into the last section of chapters in this book. What do you say we spice things up a bit?
Also, I should warn you, this is the longest chapter I have ever written.
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Okay, I’m just going to paste everyone’s animal here so everyone can read it if they haven’t. I tagged everyone who is participating, plus Esther.
I’m going to wait a few more days before starting, which will give time to those people who haven’t introduced their characters yet. And,…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Oh! That’s a relief! I wasn’t sure how to make my characters interact with a 2D dog!!!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”
Wait, he’s 2D?? Or is that figuratively? Would you mind explaining?
But, yes! That will…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.
You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But now, will he…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
YEEEESSSS!!!!!
STRIPE HAS BEEN HUGGED!!!!
*does a happy dance* – Stephie
Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!! – Ellette
*Bows*
AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!
Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter! I’ts been a while since I’ve done two chapters in one week, but I got excited by this one and put off some school. So here you go!
This is the chapter where my book will be redeemed in the eyes of Ellette, Ducktactor, and Stephie. I hope you’re all…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I don’t know if any of you can, but I thought I’d just ask a bunch of people if they wanted to join the Animal RP. I know some are already…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter. This was getting a little long and I realized I didn’t have too much planned for chapter the 26th, so I decided to move the climax of the rescue into the next chapter. I should hopefully get that to you by the end of this week.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Sadly, I do not know if I am going to get another chapter to you this week. I had a plan for it, and it was going well, but then one of my characters was taken hostage and is threatening to ruin the whole rescue mission and I can’t figure out how to get him out of there. Alan…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter! This scene was a little fun to write as it uses a new location that did not exist within my first draft.
The last bit of character I want Alan to develop may now be more apparent, Keliah.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
That works! Just swap wife and son for parents.
The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:
Okay, I will see what I can do about that. Though I may put this one off for a bit. Thank you for pointing this out. I’m not the most emotional person, so sometimes I struggle with writing em…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter people!
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