Stephie

@stephie

Oh! I like them. The first is very lonesome/dreamy, and the second does well painting its picture.

@stephie

We all loved the Little House books, and we had a bunch of settler costumes we’d wear. One of the only ways my mom could get us to clean the house was to pretend to be Ma, and then I’d be Mary, and my sister would be Laura, and when the youngest was old enough to play she was Carrie. We’d have SO much fun cleaning, you wouldn’t believe…

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@stephie

I still love role playing games, even though I don’t play them very often anymore.😂 Dollhouse, except it would catch fire, tea party, but the rubber duck’s little brothers would find a way to wreck it, new rubber ducks had to make perilous journeys to reach the other ones, a ridiculous amount of romantic drama…our toys have int…[Read more]

@stephie yessss

@theducktator Executed for treason? Yikes. I’d hate to be the pecans.

@raxforge

“….the long lost cousin from Australia who was in jail for arson and wants to burn down the White House.”

Hey! That’s me!

oh so I guess you’re Sniper and Huntress’s child, then. (RAE’s told you about them right?)

@elishavet-pidyon ooooh I like…[Read more]

@liberty lol. I have 52 snowballs as of the last count.

*cackling*

@ellette-giselle Glad you liked it! This is probably the closest thing to a romance plot that I’ve written. (Instead of it being a small side plot.)

@stephie Since you apparently want to lay catch. *chases you*

OK…

*a giant cloud of snowballs puffs up from my…[Read more]

@theducktator

That’s really cool, I’m a Catholic and we celebrate Advent too though we don’t have all the same days as you mentioned.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for the video, I’ll check it out.

@stephie

Understandable of your parents, the whole Santa thing is one of the bigger objections some people have to Christmas. Also I love that you hav…[Read more]

@stephie

My mom collects Nativity sets, and we have so many there’s never enough room for all of them, lol.

@stephie @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

I know I told the others I would wait until the end of this draft before I discussed if the way I included magic in the last chapter went too far, but in the mean time, I would love to here your thoughts on the matter.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Darkness falls…

Chapter the 30th – The Prison

@ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator

(Not sure if Keilah has read everything yet, so I won’t tag her.)

Question. Since Alan is using magic again, he is going to get some more wizard scars. I’m trying to decide what to go with, and I have a couple of options I think would be interesting. Here they are:

1. Hand: His right hand will become like…

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@stephie

Also, I love the map! I don’t know, something about maps of fantasy worlds just gets at me. *Smiles dreamily, looking back towards The Lord of the Rings* I also like the name Huntt for a town; it just seems to fit.

@ellette-giselle

I love the map!!!

Thanks, both of you! One of these days, I will actually make the up-to-date version.

@stephie

I hope that helps! 🙂

Yes it does, thank you! I will come back to this later and come up with some ideas.

@linus-smallprint

Alan, must you do something stupid????😩

@ellette-giselle

Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.

I think it’s his mother.

Maybe.

Ooh, good theory.

@stephie

Seriously, that gave me the ugh-the-main-character-is-doing-something-stupid sinking feeling in my stomach

Same.

@stephie

Also, thank you for saying something again. I was growing a little worried that no one other than Ellette was still reading since she has been the only one to respond for the past few chapters. So I’m glad to know you are still reading!

@ellette-giselle @stephie

Let’s be honest. This wasn’t surprising, was it? Rour warned you several times.

You can successfully torture your readers.

It’s part of the job.

What do you think of Alan’s logic for deciding to go back?

Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.

I think it’s his mother.

Maybe.

Maybe indeed, Ell…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.

Chapter the 29th – The Crow

Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.

@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge

I’M MELTING!

Hmmm…. pastes @stephie @grcr @arcticanimals and @keilah-h upside the head.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).

Spaces to help hide the contents:

I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter.

I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?

Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]