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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator
(Not sure if Keilah has read everything yet, so I won’t tag her.)
Question. Since Alan is using magic again, he is going to get some more wizard scars. I’m trying to decide what to go with, and I have a couple of options I think would be interesting. Here they are:
- Hand: His right hand will become like…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Also, I love the map! I don’t know, something about maps of fantasy worlds just gets at me. *Smiles dreamily, looking back towards The Lord of the Rings* I also like the name Huntt for a town; it just seems to fit.
I love the map!!!
Thanks, both of you! One of these days, I will actually make the up-to-date version.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I hope that helps! 🙂
Yes it does, thank you! I will come back to this later and come up with some ideas.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Alan, must you do something stupid????😩
Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.
I think it’s his mother.
Maybe.
Ooh, good theory.
Seriously, that gave me the ugh-the-main-character-is-doing-something-stupid sinking feeling in my stomach
Same.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Also, thank you for saying something again. I was growing a little worried that no one other than Ellette was still reading since she has been the only one to respond for the past few chapters. So I’m glad to know you are still reading!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Let’s be honest. This wasn’t surprising, was it? Rour warned you several times.
You can successfully torture your readers.
It’s part of the job.
What do you think of Alan’s logic for deciding to go back?
Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.
I think it’s his mother.
Maybe.
Maybe indeed, Ell…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.
Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge
I’M MELTING!
Hmmm…. pastes @stephie @grcr @arcticanimals and @keilah-h upside the head.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@theshadow @stephie @ellette-giselle @grcr
Thank you to you all, Ellie appreciates it!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@stephie @theshadow @rae @esther-c @the_lost-journal
Okay…I have an update about the Animal RP. So, I was trying to figure out how I was going to do this (I spent some time reading and studying the other RPs on here), and I decided to ask you all a question about how we should do this.
To clarify: there are two ways this could go.
1. I lead…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint started the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle, @highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @raxforge, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, @rae, @the_lost-journal, @savannah_grace2009 and anyone else who cares to look.
Hello everyone!
I wanted to let you all know my sister, Elizabeth, just has self-published a book on Amazon! (She has yet to create a Kingdom…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
How nice! Welcome, Winston!
Ooh! Newfoundland dogs are so huge and poofy! And they are incredibly strong!
Lewis and Clark actually had a Newfoundland dog named Seaman who went with them on their long trip. He proved to be a worthy companion to their journey.
Another cool thing about Newfoundland dogs is that their feet are…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
All right, ladies. Time to head into the last section of chapters in this book. What do you say we spice things up a bit?
Also, I should warn you, this is the longest chapter I have ever written.
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay, I’m just going to paste everyone’s animal here so everyone can read it if they haven’t. I tagged everyone who is participating, plus Esther.
I’m going to wait a few more days before starting, which will give time to those people who haven’t introduced their characters yet. And,…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh! That’s a relief! I wasn’t sure how to make my characters interact with a 2D dog!!!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”
Wait, he’s 2D?? Or is that figuratively? Would you mind explaining?
But, yes! That will…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.
You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But now, will he…
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