Stepheroni and Cheese

@theshadow

That’s totally fine!

@stephie

Yes, give me one sec. I’ll post it and you shoot me an email. Once I get the email I’ll take me info down.

@stephie

What style dance do you do? I forgot about the book club. I’m in if you restart it!

@stephie

it’s easier for me if you just do it in the status update and then delete it once you get my test email 😉

hope you don’t mind

@stephie That’s actually a great idea!! XD

@stephie and @keilah-h

Are either of you going to be filling out the feedback document I provided earlier?

@stephie

I read your to-magic-or-n0t-t0-magic document and it seems to me that there are more reasons for including it than excluding it. At this point all you’ve got to do is evaluate whether or not the reasons for excluding spell images are so strong that they cancel out all of the numerous reasons to include it.

I dunno, it’s a hard cal…

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@whalekeeper

Sorry, I didn’t realize you had replied to this before I logged off yesterday. Thank you for your thoughts as well. I was talking to my dad about the issue and he had similar thoughts.

@stephie

On the other hand, it’s magic. It’s directly contradictory to everything Christians stand for. The Fall of man happened because humans didn’…

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@whalekeeper
Yeah let’s just say it’s been reworked about five different times XD
@Keilah-h
Ooh that sounds really cool and understandable
There’s been a few times that I’ve written fanfic for a show or movie no one has probably ever heard of
What can I say, I don’t like when things just end lol
@raxforge
Nice to meet you and I’m glad you’re enjo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie

One question I forgot in my feedback file under Worldbuilding:

Any topics you recommend I research to improve worldbuilding and make it more realistic?

Also, I somehow completely forgot to add Stripe to my list of characters I’m most eager for feedback on.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie

I’ll leave Shadow and Loopy out of this since I haven’t heard from them on here for quite a while.

I am now ready to talk about my magic system. Why is it the way it is? Well to understand that, we need to start talking about book two. I am going to have to spoil it a bit, but you…[Read more]

@stephie yesss that happens too sometimes, but less commonly.

also cool Italian writing on your signature. My mom loves that language.

@hybridlore thanks!! I guess my parents didn’t have great relationships with their siblings until they were all older so they were like “you guys should learn to like each other young so you’ll have each…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow

I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is the discussion guide. It’s rought right now. It was inspired by the discussion guides at the end of the second edition books for The Wingfeather Saga. However, I think that’s resulted in it being written for a younger audience than my book is aimed at (I’m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

End credits song! (This was the most fitting version of this song I could find. As an aside, if you haven’t, look up the history of this song.)

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Happy Boxing Day! (do you celebrate this in the USA?) Let’s box this draft up with the final chapter!

Chapter the 34th – The Choice

There is one more thing I need to write for this that I will do later. A discussion guide for the reader. After that I will have…[Read more]

@keilah-h @stephie

(also, how come humans aren’t a little more upset that lyens seem to think they’re the dominant species? Is there a human-centric country or are they just all over without a specific homeland?) 

Yes, the humans are upset, this just hasn’t been the focus of the story, and with other things to focus on, such as getting rid of the…[Read more]

@stephie

What language is your forum signature?

@stephie

Pff 🤪

@keilah-h

And that’s not all, you’re also riding a flying broomstick and trying to avoid two perpetually active dodgeballs.