Stepheroni and Cheese

@savannah_grace2009

Waitttt, that’s not a bad idea!! I’m definitely going to consider that. My original idea that I’m working with now is that Hallie ends up joining/hanging out with a group of girls who are “popular”ish. They give her advice and pretend to be nice to her. In fact she ends up spending a lot of time with them since all her other…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE IT

@esther-c

*GASP* you should have a bunch of drama with Tyler and Hallie….like Hallie could like Tyler (and that’s why when he passes away it affects her so much) and it could distract her from God too, because she’s trying to impress him!

Or she might not actually like him, but she tells herself she does because everyone else likes someone and…[Read more]

ohhh haha after all this time I am still tagging you by your old tag…oops

@freed_and_redeemed

@freedomwriter76

Aww thanks!!!!! That means a lot <3

@whalekeeper

Are the rubber bands the things that connect to your top bracket and your bottom band? because that’s what I have (though i can take mine out for eating and stuff). They hurt so bad and I hate them!

Braces just suck :/

@theshadow

You should!! It’s called Billy Joe McGuffrey Theatrical version.

@esther-c

Thanks! It’s from my dad’s dad joke book.

@trailblazer

Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]

@theducktator

I love your signature 🤣

@whalekeeper

Ugh, braces are the worst. 😖

@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h

Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.

Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.

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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION

!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…

Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava spewed from t…[Read more]

@theshadow

Alas, we don’t have the dvd. Maybe I’ll get it from the library. Have you ever listened to the full length Billy Joe McGuffrey?

@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@whalekeeper

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.

But why???????

Sorry, but I have to let out my feelings somewhere

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.

@linus-smallprint

Cool! Good to know; thank you for clarifying ;P

*Happily watching*

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, so this is a wonderful point of discussion to go to when it comes to God’s nature. What is reality itself, and what is existence.

Alriiiight, let’s do this *cracks knuckles*

If there are multiple necessary beings, then their identity would be partially defined by their relationship with the other, which means they are d…

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