Stepheroni and Cheese

@savannah_grace2009

Heeeyy thank you! And yes, visuals are sooo helpful!! I really recommend color coding. It can be overwhelming at times, but it feels like a huge step up from containing everything in your head.

Is it just me, or do we need more tips for creating actual hands-on plot?

Like, I like learning about plot points, but brainstorming the actual meat of those points – “the zombies attack here and trigger the electric grid in xyz cities” – is hard. And no one really talks about it.

Why should I include a zombie attack at this moment? Are these…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I LOVE THIS IDEA

I’m a super visual person so this might help a lot!

@calyhuge

You mean you’re not going to publish it? 🥺🥺🥺

I didn’t say that. But I’m not going to say I will either, because I’m an undedicated uncontrollable teenager.

@theducktator

Sticky noooooootes. Those are perfect for this. I need to gimme some XD

@linus-smallprint

Oh yeah, I’m familiar with Fallacy Detective.

I think the most similar a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m just gonna vent a little bit…don’t feel like you have to answer XD XD

I just have to get it all out of my system haha

I’m trying to make a hUgE dEcIsIoN that could affect my life in so many ways.

I’m trying to decide if I’m going back to public school or not this year.

Like, part of me wants to keep going just to be able to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*tries not to cry* 😭😭😭

Whaley you’re the best 💗💗💗 thanks girl

@whalekeeper

I’d probably not be convinced that they were actually dying until the last minute.

@esther-c

Ooh, yes.

Anyone interested in reviving this topic?? I can put together a list of prompts for August if anyone else is interested… 👀

@whalekeeper

Wow, that’s a hard question. Ermm…

I think I’d immediately start thinking of a way to keep them here longer. Is there a way that they don’t have to die? It might take me a little bit to come to terms with the fact that there’s not. Honestly, at that point, I think I’d start trying to spend as much time with them as I can and make as…[Read more]

Poor Cassian though.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so confused now.😂

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of Cass to die in his place, he HESITATES. So the opportunity is lost and Cass dies, when Eloy could have saved him.

So now Eloy has to live with the guilt that he should have and…

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@savannah_grace2009

You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]

…@savannah_grace2009

Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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@ellette-giselle

unfortunately, that scene is a LOOOONNNNNGGGG ways away.

We have plenty of other heartbreaking things before then…

but thanks for being so interested in it! That means a lot!!!!!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yeahhhh! hahaha

Thanks for letting me bounce ideas off of you!!! I really appreciate that! <3

@ellette-giselle

I have ADHD…it’s not my fault!!! 😂😂

you’re gonna hate me when you hear what I’m gonna do! heheheh

So you know how you said that Eloy should die INSTEAD of Cass?

Well, Cass is going to be executed.

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

WAIT actually Cassian is still dying nvm

I forgot about that

I HAVE PLANS