Stepheroni and Cheese

@theducktator

This one’s for you.

@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD

Chapter 15

Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.

Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.

A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]

@theshadow

<333

I’m glad you liked it!

@theshadow

Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3

Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!

@highscribeofatherium

hahaha you’re good!!!

Sister: “What’s a cheese monger?”

Me: “It’s like a haberdasher, but with cheese instead of hats.”

@keilah-h

You’re welcome!

oop I see I already thanked you. sorry. XD

Lol.

@highscribeofaetherium

Ouch. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c

Thanks guys <333

@highscribeofaetherium

He didn’t get it sloshed over him–it was much worse and more painful, I’m afraid.

he  tried to eat it when it was wayyyyyyyyyy too hot XD XD

should I make this clearer?

@theducktator

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

@ellette-giselle

My fantasy isn’t a typical fantasy.

It’s combining medieval times with our modern world. So there are cars like we have, and pistols, and other things you’ll see later.

The rules for my world are…there are no rules.

I’m not even sure if this works or not (the author I’m getting feedback from said that they can be combined…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

 Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.

How do you know this?😂

I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.

Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.

@theducktator

Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️

@ellette-giselle

I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.

@savannah_grace2009

Wait, Cass is leading her on? Why would he do that?

Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period.

I think it’s a pretty sucky age gap but I guess that’s beside the point. Does this world have a time period tied to it? Sef was looking at a photograph at one point and it made me curious.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, she definitely needs a stuffed toad. Named Bartholomew, or Lollihops, or Snugglepie, or Melchizedek. And maybe some chocolate.

@theducktator

hahahaha lol

And will go through more, since she’s the main character.

YOU HAVE NO IDEA 😬😬😬

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no. I liked you, Cassian! Don’t hurt Sef, she’s gone through a lot. (And will go through more, since she’s the main character.) Lilitu, go buy your girl a comfort stuffie. Maybe a toad?