Stepheroni and Cheese

@koshka

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even accidentally imply it’s okay. You don’t want to give your reader an idea, or thought pattern they didn’t have, but you do want to reach for a kid who’s been there, or is there, and needs that lifeline. That they are loved, that they can make it with God’s he…

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@keilah-h

Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

I think I will keep the Payne/Pythonos. I agree, it would be cool!!!!

Thanks, they fit really well and I lik…[Read more]

@grcr

I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)

@grcr

Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP

Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.

@elishavet-pidyon

*is in bliss*

XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.

The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.

Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]

@grcr

AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!

That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3

I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.

So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3

@hybridlore

Thank you so much!!!!

I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
I appreciate you so so SO much, girl <3

@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else

Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!

The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.

The point of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

Same. XD

@hybridlore

Thank you soooo much girl…

@theducktator

Really?? tysmmm that means a lot <3

@savannah_grace2009

DO IT! THIS IS SO COOL!

@koshka

Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**

I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!

@ellette-giselle

That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll

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Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.

I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha

SO please tear it apart as well XD

@the_lost-journal

They’re called the Imprecatory Psalms. Psalms 59 and 83 for example.

@the_lost-journal

Like how in the first Catechism it said it was okay to pray for the death of your enemies… what..?

Some of the Psalms are like that, so I wouldn’t say it’s never true. Most of the time it is best to pray for their repentance though.

@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3

@theducktator
Yay!! Praise the Lord!!!