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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 22 minutes ago
I enjoyed that quite a bit. Tag me if you post more!
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 56 minutes ago
Ack, sorry I disappeared! It was garage sale weekend in our neighborhood.
First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭
You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha
I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3
Thank you!💛💛💛
The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. P…
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 day, 15 hours ago
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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?
[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
How old are you?
“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days, 7 hours ago
I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 7 hours ago
Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 7 hours ago
This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 15 hours ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 17 hours ago
I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
Ohhhh that makes more sense.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 20 hours ago
Boom, finally caught up
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 22 hours ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 4 hours ago
I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…
The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 3 days, 11 hours ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 12 hours ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 17 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 17 hours ago
@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr
I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol
so if you want to read it…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 6 hours ago
THANK YOUUU (:
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 6 hours ago
I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!
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