Stepheroni and Cheese

@ellette-giselle @loopylin @theshadow @koshka @whalekeeper @whoever else was talking about this, I don’t know

I’m a little bit late to the party (a couple months late, but whatever), but I’ve got a question relating to the topic of women going into battle.

Sort of.

In my WIP, my female main character begins doing uncontroversial fine-for-girls…[Read more]

Not finished my words, but I did want to show y’all some poems I wrote:

 

Éphémère

Retirés comme l’air de nos poumons

Vous êtes le silence maintenant

Nous sommes ce que nous devenons

Les chaînes du temps en remontant.

 

Here’s a translation:

Ephemeral

Withdrawn like the air of our lungs

You are the silence now

We are what we become<…[Read more]

@theducktator

THAT. Role playing games…*leans back and remembers*

As the eldest, I have many memories of leading role-playing games with my sisters. Think tea party but with a plot and all of the dolls are sick with appendicitis. (There were a lot of games. Some of them were action packed, like when we had a villain who wanted to take everyone…[Read more]

You know you’re a writer when you get annoyed with creative writing assignments for being so rigid.

@elishavet-pidyon

*chants* na na na na na na you ca-an’t get me!

*runs to hide behind a tree*

@esther-c

We also have a new tradition where we eat a different cuisine for dinner on the three(?) nights leading up to Christmas. Like Mexican, Chinese, pizza, and then on Christmas Eve we eat finger foods so there aren’t a lot of leftovers to leave room in the fridge for left over Christmas dinner. 😋

Lol pretty much. My family usually has C…[Read more]

@theshadow

Yes, I celebrate Christmas. Being Catholic, I also do advent during December. It’s a time of reflection and preparation for Christ’s coming. Christmas for my family and I is when we rejoice because Jesus came to Earth, and when we remember His birth and His love for us.

However, my parents have decided to abandon certain Christmas…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Here’s your 700 (actually a little over) for the 14 snowballs y’all threw at me.

ridiculous amount of snowballs

Y’all gotta chill XD

So you had 14 snowballs thrown at you.

Now I have 14 snowballs to throw at other people😏

And then you threw 14 snowballs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wait for it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wait for it.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I think I may struggle with this partially be because my Dad and I are not very emotional and struggle with being sincere, and sometimes can seem stiff. My interactions with him naturally are what I refer to for these scenes, so Alan and Charles have picked it up.

 

.Ah, I see. I have a very close relationship with my Dad, so I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Just-

What-

No! 

Seriously, that gave me the ugh-the-main-character-is-doing-something-stupid sinking feeling in my stomach, so bravo. You can successfully torture your readers.

In chapter the 28th, I did notice that some of the dialogue between Alan and his father is a bit stiff. For example:

Alan gave his father a…

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*Wakes up*

*Stumbles downstairs and grabs a bowl of cereal*

*Sits down at computer to check email*

*Gets hit right in the head with a huge snowball travelling at the speed of light*

This. Is. War.

@theducktator x2

@linus-smallprint

Congrats to your sister! Looks like the perfect Christmas present for myself….

@liberty

If you guys want to introduce them/give more details, please go ahead!

Gladly!

Winston used to be person, but I won’t describe what his human form looked like. He was a ruthless Captain in the Evil King’s army (I’m writing a novelized fairy tale, so I have permission to name my villain the Evil King lol) and a sorceress came and cursed…[Read more]

@liberty

Nah, that was figurtive. I talk now like I’m writing a novel.

I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”

@liberty

So I’ve got a character who’s kind of a dog.

Lemme explain.

His name is Winston and he used to have a human form, except that he wasn’t the nicest guy and a sorceress came along and cursed him. So now he’s a dog. He can still talk and stuff, but he looks like a dog.

@linus-smallprint

As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

YEEEESSSS!!!!!

STRIPE HAS BEEN HUGGED!!!!

*does a happy dance*

@linus-smallprint

I read the updated version of Chapter the 23rd, and I really like it! You did a great job of capturing Alan’s emotions and his motivation, and demonstrating the saving power of the Savior through Charles.

The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:

“Alan, my Son! I am so glad to hear t…

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“A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.” -Steve Martin

My middle sister: Ew! *Young person I know, I won’t tell you who* farted on me!

Young person I know, and won’t tell you who: It’s part of my culture!

That actually happened. The younger person was like seven.