Stephie

@liberty

Nah, that was figurtive. I talk now like I’m writing a novel.

I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”

@liberty

So I’ve got a character who’s kind of a dog.

Lemme explain.

His name is Winston and he used to have a human form, except that he wasn’t the nicest guy and a sorceress came along and cursed him. So now he’s a dog. He can still talk and stuff, but he looks like a dog.

@linus-smallprint

As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

YEEEESSSS!!!!!

STRIPE HAS BEEN HUGGED!!!!

*does a happy dance*

@linus-smallprint

I read the updated version of Chapter the 23rd, and I really like it! You did a great job of capturing Alan’s emotions and his motivation, and demonstrating the saving power of the Savior through Charles.

The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:

“Alan, my Son! I am so glad to hear t…

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“A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.” -Steve Martin

My middle sister: Ew! *Young person I know, I won’t tell you who* farted on me!

Young person I know, and won’t tell you who: It’s part of my culture!

That actually happened. The younger person was like seven.

This one’s also from Tolkien, because Tolkien is amazing:

“Do you wish me a good morning, or mean that it is a good morning whether I want it or not; or that you feel good this morning; or that it is a morning to be good on?”

And this one:

“War must be, while we defend our lives against a destroyer who would devour all; but I do not love the…[Read more]

Okay this one’s from Tolkien:

“Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends.”

@theducktator

She ruined the boxcar children for you?

@ellette-giselle

SHAME

XD

@linus-smallprint

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

I was just telling my little sister that she NEEDS to read those books.

@ellette-giselle

It was the expression, the word choices, the interaction of all three of them combined with personality…

Yeah, something about that. I can’t pinpoint it either.

Btw, if Alan doesn’t end up loving Martha I think I’m going to kill him. THEY. ARE. PERFECT.

Just saying.

I completely agree, although I’d like to ask @linus-smallprint…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Happy Thanksgiving!

I just looked up what sweet potatoes and marshmallows is and I am going to have to try it. No kidding.

I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food. 🙂

@theducktator

Maybe Eric is just having a Peter moment?

@linus-smallprint

NO!

Why? Why did Eric have to do this? “Oh why, oh why, oh why”

JUST WHY?

@linus-smallprint

I actually can’t remember; that’s the funny thing about questions I mean to ask.

I haven’t read the latest chapter yet, but seeing as everyone is yelling at you I think I will go and take a look XD

@theducktator

My fourteen year old brain refuses to comprehend the concept of a “crush on a fictional character.” Therefore, I will also pretend the above conversation does not exist.

@linus-smallprint

I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no wikipedia page. XD

@ellette-giselle

I would like to offer my sincerest apologies XD

My goodness I lied again. 4 EST works as long as it’s not Tuesday, Thursday, or Saturday. And this weekend I’ll be gone Sunday, although I can probably take my chromebook with me and do it anyways.