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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.
I was just telling my little sister that she NEEDS to read those books.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
It was the expression, the word choices, the interaction of all three of them combined with personality…
Yeah, something about that. I can’t pinpoint it either.
Btw, if Alan doesn’t end up loving Martha I think I’m going to kill him. THEY. ARE. PERFECT.
Just saying.
I completely agree, although I’d like to ask @linus-smallprint…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
I just looked up what sweet potatoes and marshmallows is and I am going to have to try it. No kidding.
I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food. 🙂
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Maybe Eric is just having a Peter moment?
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
I actually can’t remember; that’s the funny thing about questions I mean to ask.
I haven’t read the latest chapter yet, but seeing as everyone is yelling at you I think I will go and take a look XD
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 4 weeks ago
My fourteen year old brain refuses to comprehend the concept of a “crush on a fictional character.” Therefore, I will also pretend the above conversation does not exist.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 4 weeks ago
I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no wikipedia page. XD
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
I would like to offer my sincerest apologies XD
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
My goodness I lied again. 4 EST works as long as it’s not Tuesday, Thursday, or Saturday. And this weekend I’ll be gone Sunday, although I can probably take my chromebook with me and do it anyways.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
I’m good for 4 EST as long as it’s not on a Tuesday or a Thursday.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
Okay, okay, the kid hugging Charles was really cute, and it worked for the story. I guess I’ll have to respect the author’s wishes now.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Haha I lied, I forgot exactly how busy I am. Babysitting monday nights, extra class tuesdays, choir wednesdays, theatre thursdays, and sometimes youth night on fridays…All I can guarentee is one hour between 9 and 8 at night! Sorry 🙂
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@ so many people
Let’s do this! I’m available anytime during the week from 6 am to 7 am or from 4 pm to 9 pm, or on the weekend. Eastern Daylight Saving Time.
Maybe we should do it on a day when everyone’s going to be awake, no matter where we are. Like New Year. Or then again, that could be a very bad idea ’cause everyone’s going to be gone off…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 1 week ago
Whoa. There is nothing else in my book that causes it to stand out?!?
There’s a lot that causes your book to stand out. All of the different species you’ve come up with, for example, and the complex characters. The plot is original, your narration is funny and fresh, and thus far it’s a unique story!
We all really just want a…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 1 week ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 1 week ago
linus-smallprint
Now that I’ve read ellette-giselle ‘s suggestion about a little kid hugging stripe, I can’t stop picturing it. That would be so cute!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Sometimes, just describing other things they’re doing with their body language is helpful. For example, observing a conversation between my sisters that’s going on right now, I can see a lot of things they’re doing that don’t involve looking at one another:
- Blowing bubbles with gum
- Toying with the carpet
- Cupping their…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I love love love it when characters come together of their own accord! It just makes it so much easier to write about their relationship. I mean, it’s not completely necessary to the story, but it can offer a really great subplot to root for.
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