Starshiness

@starshiness

Ohh, you’re a really good writer!! You’ve got me hooked!!

Also, I don’t believe we’ve met. I’m Bridget, but for short, you can call me the High Scribe of Aetherium. I write fantasy and this ridiculous brain of mine won’t stop pumping out new (very distracting) WIP ideas. I can’t find the ‘off’ switch. Anyway, see ya around!!

@starshiness

Sorry it took me so long to respond. I love it! I do agree with Esther, that it is going a bit fast, but other than that it was amazing!

@starshiness

OH NOOOOO 😭😭😭😭😭

I feel ya girl. #Writerlife 😭😅😝

@starshiness You’re welcome!

@starshiness

Hm…

Well, it may not necessarily need to be slowed down. I guess it depends on the pacing of the rest of the story and what’s going to happen next.

If you were to take some more time on something, I’d say talk about Raven’s first day of traveling more. I’d like to know how she felt as she travels farther away from home. Like, I a…[Read more]

@starshiness

I love this!!

The only critique I have is that I feel like things are happening kinda fast. But you know your story and I don’t. So maybe it is the way you want it. 😊

Anyway, keep ‘em coming!!

@starshiness

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOO GURL I sympathize strongly…

@starshiness

YAY! I love this so much!

@starshiness

Thank you for tagging me and please keep doing so!! This is really great! Your vocabulary and wording is spot on. Your characters are really great too and I love all of their names. Any reasoning behind the names you chose?
My only critique might be that events seem to be playing out a little quickly, but that might be okay depending…[Read more]

@starshiness Nice! I’m liking it so far!

@starshiness

Oooh, I love it!!

You’ll have to tell me when you eventually find a Keston faceclaim. 😏

@starshiness

Ok, I’ll definitely do that. 😉😜

@otherworldlyhistorian @esther-c @euodia-vision @starshiness @smiley

thank you all so much for your help!! 😭 y’all have some great advice!! I’m gonna try to see what I’m gonna need to do but this advice is awesome, thank you all so much.

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @janellebelovedpig @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter79 @landric @euodia-vision @Everyone!!!!!

I was just thinking about this today, and since its summer I was wondering if we are still going to do this? When would work best for everybody?

@elanor @overcomer @janellebelovedpig @starshiness

Those are great! Here is one of mine I found, I wrote it for some of my best friends who were leaving the neighborhood a few years ago.  Its dosent really rhyme, but the words flow great together!

The neighborhood By- Allison C

Everything you said, everything you did

Changed the ne…[Read more]

Umm… idk if my other post posted… let’s try this again

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @keilah-h @acancello @anyone-else!

Here’s a scene I just wrote! I love when my charries goof off. 😜

 
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Ev woke up tired the next morning, so after they ate lunch, he let his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlfantasy12 @starshiness @hybridlore @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @awsumfaith @anyone-else!!

Here’s a scene I just wrote! I love when my charries goof around. 😜

Ev woke up tired the next morning, so after they ate lunch, he let his eyes close and fell right to sleep. A few hours later, he w…

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@starshiness

WE DEFINITELY HAVE ISSUES XD Hey, at least none of us are alone tho lolll

YES! Hahaha

AND I LOVE HIS BOARD!!!!

@freedomwriter76

he reminds me of Westley so much…XD

oh my gosh yessssss