Starshiness

@loopylin If I liked your story before, I love it now, lol.

It sounds so cool!

@freedomwriter76

Tirion

Tirion gave Wrecker a nod, listening as the brothers chatted about their roommates and recent doings.

He glanced over at the other occupants at the table, then smiled as he saw Riya waving. He waved back and was about to walk over when a muscular boy came walking over.

“Hi, I’m Steve. Steve Rogers.” He stuck out his h…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I’m good with that!

@freedomwriter76 OOH I’d love to do this, but I’m not sure which of my many characters (borrowed or original) I should do.

@sarafini Whatever you want to do! I was asking because one of my charries is in the group she’s bringing in.

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @smiley

Riya

Riya watched as Wrecker’s face broke out in a huge smile.

“I didn’t know you were here!” An excited voice declared.

Riya looked behind her and saw Tirion, along with two other boys who had similar wings and tails to Wrecker, come running over. She smiled and waved at Tirion, as a si…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @freedomwriter76

That’s a really good point!!

It’s actually one thing that I was really excited to write about in my trilogy. The fact that Ami’s parents love her, support her, and are her role models.

She has a great relationship with her mother, and she looks to her father as so…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Ohhh ok. He has heterochromia–that’s so cool!

Maybe when you mention it, instead of saying “one eye” you say “gold eye?” It’ll be a bit less confusing, even if you have to specify a bit more.

@whalekeeper

Great topic idea, btw!!! 😃

Okay, yes, so I’ve definitely noticed this in a lot of books. I do have this one book where there are a lot of parents like that, but it’s ’cause they’re all stuck up royals…. and it’s the kids too, so yeah. 😅

Anyway, yes! We definitely need more good parents!

While he doesn’t come into the story until…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin I think the stakes were fine there! I would suggest you build it up a bit more in the next chapter (although you already said you were going to do that). And it is a first draft, so you don’t have to get it perfect the first time.

I’m liking this so far!! Rina’s healing magic is cool.

@power lol, you always make me laugh with your long fancy explanations.

@smiley Ooh! I’ll be frequenting this forum. Wanna hear about my Star Wars rewrite where all the characters are half-dragon?

@godlyfantasy12 wait a sec, Ridley has one eye? Did he lose it somehow, or was it like a mutation or something? @loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin

Rampart

Ridley thrashed for a bit before stopping.

His little human nails apparently weren’t useless after all. He’d drawn blood with them while clutching the sides of his head.

His eye glowed…[Read more]

@keilah-h @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12

Derek

Derek watched as Ridley ran down the hall. He had a fleeting thought to chase after him, but he decided it was best to let him be.

Derek ran a hand through his hair and looked down at his dark combat boots. That kid… something was, not wrong, but different about him… and that som…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 Ok! Want to make it a single group or would you rather two separate ones?

@freedomwriter76 All right, I’m ok with that.

@euodia-vision I think so.

@freedomwriter76 I think they were just getting situated–Hunter was showing his drawings to the other boys–so if you want to skip that, we can just say they’re on their way to the lunchroom or something. Or they can walk by on the others’ way out or something.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ami

Ami had a small smile on her lips as she walked back to her dorm room. She was glad everything with Ev was straightened out. Maybe he wouldn’t care as much when Clint asked her to the dance.

Her thoughts came to a screeching halt.

When Clint asked her to the dance…

It was more like, if Clint asked her to…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yep, what they (@kyronthearcanin and @euodia-vision) said! XD

@mineralizedwritings

Feel free to have your villian(s) join @freedomwriter76 and my bois!

@mineralizedwritings

We have one big group and then Erich and Erebus are split off, at least right now.