Starshiness

@freed_and_redeemed

I love this scene!

Welllll, you already know I like Matthias. 😛 But I think I have to agree with you—I like Moishe too. I get the vibe that he has a layered backstory, more than he might be willing to share… 🤔

@freed_and_redeemed This all sounds so cool!! I love all your new characters, I can’t choose my favorite.

@freed_and_redeemed lol how you said Riker and Leon “aren’t cooperating”

happens all the time with my characters.

oh and your new charries sound amazing

@theducktator ooh interesting!

I like how the female duck is called Serpentine, a long, majestic, complicated name (how’d she get it anyway?) and then the male duck is just Bob. Brilliant.

Ending’s a bit choppy, but that’s nothing editing can’t fix.

@theducktator you’re welcome!!

@theducktator

Good choice 😁

@freed_and_redeemed

This is a book I’d totally read!! I’ve actually been reading too many books outside of the genre I write lately. XD Authors are always saying you should read lots of books in your genre, but I enjoy reading his-fic so much! lol! I really love this idea though! Be sure to tag me if you post any snippet of it. 😊

@esther-c you’re welcome!!

@trailblazer @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h

Thanks for the thoughts, y’all!! Your opinions are helping me figure this out a lot. I might just step back from it for a while, or try to write a little farther ahead in the story and see what happens.

I was gonna save this new WIP for NaNo this year buuuuut…. Yeah that ain’t gonna happen. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah I totally get it. No worries! <3

Ah, I gotcha. I’m kinda there too. At least in one of my WIPs. If I really set myself loose on a different one I’ve been working on on the side, then I’d be writing a lot. XD

Ok, awesome! Glad it was helpful!

Of course!! 😊

@esther-c If you don’t have any ideas for your older story, I think it’s okay to set it aside and wait until you have inspiration.

I have tons of half-filled notebooks containing stories I haven’t written parts for in years (but who knows, maybe I’ll go over them again and think “Hey, I can use this in my next story if I change it up a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed ooooh I like it!!

@rae ok, if you haven’t noticed, I changed Jaylen’s recognition of Hunter to more of a “huh, do I know him?”

Jaylen

The little creature clapped her hands, spilling water everywhere, before somehow pulling the water she’d splashed Silvanis with back from him.

“Fascinating.” Jaylen crouched onto all fours and studied it. “Is it yours?”

Hunter…[Read more]

Alright lovely peoples… I need help. (If I had a nickel for all the times I’ve written a post with that phrase… XD)

My main WIP has come to a screeching halt. And I’m not sure if I should keep it that way or push through whatever kind of writer’s block this is.

I’ve been much more excited about another WIP, and I can’t tell if I’ve stopped…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Um, both please!! 😁😂

@theducktator

I vote for Howard 😎

@rae lol

it certainly won’t improve when the other charrie I might add shows up either. I’m planning to save him for when they’re actually on the quest you talked about though.

@freed_and_redeemed

I’m liking this character! He’s interesting, despite the fact that I know nearly nothing about his backstory.

@rae It’s not an insult, Silvanis, you silly! I don’t believe Jaylen’s actually seen humans or any humanoid besides dragons before tbh. Hunter has, but he’s not the one talking.

Hunter

“I’m not little! And just so you know, I can actually fly! Wings or not.” Silvanis snapped, baring his fangs at them, shortly before Mayfly splashed him with…[Read more]